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    Emi GS
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NaPoWriMo-2016 - 11. Day 11: Still Heartbroken

strong>April 11
I am still feeling the heart ache that created by me because of the guy I am never going to get. And I can't write more than these four lines...

All the tears dried away.

Each one of my dreams scattered.

My whole world got crashed.

After all those, I am still heartbroken.

span style="font-size:1em;line-height:1.3em;">Thank you all for spending your time to read my poems. Any comment or compliment is appreciated. After all your words are the encouragement we get for the effort we put.
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Mikiesboy

Awww Emi ... I wish I could fix your broken heart. I'm sorry you're sad and it's so hard. Your poem is beautiful and heartfelt. Were that things were different, my friend.
tim xo

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Defiance19

Hugs Emi... Even though you're still heartbroken you expressed your feelings beautifully. I hope it gets better for you soon..

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Headstall

Beautifully expressed, my friend. It will get better... in the meantime, look after you... cheers... Gary...

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On 05/15/2016 01:15 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Awww Emi ... I wish I could fix your broken heart. I'm sorry you're sad and it's so hard. Your poem is beautiful and heartfelt. Were that things were different, my friend.

tim xo

I am an emotional man(wow! I wanted to say Boy :D ) Tim. And yes, you people have been great support every time I get low/sad. I'd be thankful for that. Thank You for the caring words.

 

~Emi.

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On 05/15/2016 04:20 AM, AC Benus said:

Four heartbreaking lines... Feel better, Emi.

And direct from a broken heart. Thank You Ben, I am feeling a lot better now.

 

~Emi.

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On 05/15/2016 12:58 PM, Defiance19 said:

Hugs Emi... Even though you're still heartbroken you expressed your feelings beautifully. I hope it gets better for you soon..

*Hugs you Back* Aunt Def... :)

 

I have to. Next year, I don't know where I would be. So, I don't wanna miss this great opportunity. I'd written out of every situation for not to miss this.

 

Thank you for the kind words... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 05/15/2016 01:38 PM, Headstall said:

Beautifully expressed, my friend. It will get better... in the meantime, look after you... cheers... Gary...

I am Gary. And thank You for the Nice review... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 05/15/2016 08:46 PM, Parker Owens said:

So sad, so simply written. It is beautiful, but the pain is so real.

At that moment, it was unbearable. I cried all night. But I am fine right. And happy indeed... :)

 

Thank You for the great review... :)

 

~Emi.

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