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Predator Prey - 5. Escape

em>No special warnings for this chapter, apart from general squalor.

Silence. He snapped to awareness in deep silence. No party. No noise of any kind.

Sunday. Of course. Sunday was always the quietest morning of the entire week in the residence.

The only remaining evidence of the previous night's debauchery from his place on the bed was the stench of beer, smoke, sex and vomit. Someone had lost it somewhere in the apartment. Maybe several someones. More than once.

He stifled a groan as he managed to move protesting muscles into a sitting position on the bed. His ass didn't appreciate the change. He hurt. His ass burned and ached and throbbed in pain. He wondered if it would ever work again. He held his head in his hands, and stayed in that position for a long time, just getting used to being semi-upright again. He wondered if he needed to go to a hospital.

Hell, no. He'd wasn't going to any damn hospital. He'd be fine. He had to be.

At least his roommate wasn't in the room.

After what seemed an eternity, he eased himself forward, looking for some clothes to put on. Nothing on the floor that he could see. He'd been naked for twenty-four hours, he reckoned. He stood, pawed in his drawer, and pulled on some jeans: a tee, a hoodie, socks and sneakers followed after. His wallet. He needed his wallet.

He groped gingerly around under the bed for his pants from the day – no, two nights - before. Nothing.

With increasing urgency, he searched the bedroom. In time, he found the leather billfold, tossed carelessly on his roommate's study desk. Stupid name for the stolid piece of oak furniture; the redhead had never done any kind of studying there. They'd fucked once or twice on the hard wood surface, though.

The billfold was empty. No cash, no credit cards or debit cards – there had been four – virtually nothing remained. The only things left to him were a library card, his student ID, an expired coupon to a local pizza place, and his driver's license.

His keys were missing. And his phone. What had they done with his phone? He practically lived on the thing. Neither keys nor phone were anywhere in the room; another, more thorough search told him that.

Another missing item registered in his brain. His lockbox. The big, grey steel box held pretty much all his stock of the pricey stuff. It was what he made the real money on. All the best weed, the pills, the powders – and the cash – all that was in the box. It wasn't just that the box was empty, it was gone completely.

He hesitated to leave the confines of his bedroom, his prison for the past day and night. Confronting Ted and the redhead could be dangerous. Would be dangerous. The throbbing ache in his butt, gut, and joints reminded him of that.

No choice, though. He had to find his phone. He needed to see what was up. He eased himself out of the bedroom.

The social area of the suite was a disaster area. It always was after one of his events, but this was worse than usual. He'd need to hire a cleaning service and pay them overtime for all this.

A few late-stayers were draped on bits of furniture or the floor where they'd passed out. After every event, he usually woke people like this and made them help with the cleanup in the afternoon.

Ted and the redhead slept, entwined quite naked on the couch, where they'd obviously coupled sometime in the darkness. Their clothes could have been anywhere in the mess all over the floor. He picked his way around the room carefully, trying not to wake anyone. He checked a couple of stray pairs of pants for his keys or cards. Nothing.

In the second bedroom, he found a pile of naked bodies sprawled on the bed. The room smelled like the rest of the suite, a bad mix of pot and semen. He didn't have to ponder what the customers had got up to in there. He backed away. His keys turned up in the kitchen, lying on the counter beside a half dozen mostly empty bottles. One of his credit cards lay next to them. He gathered these up, but further search proved fruitless. No phone. He wondered if he had anything left in his account.

The lockbox was nowhere to be seen.

He found a laptop in the bathroom, of all places. It wasn't his. His own computer had some rather embarrassing records and figures and files on it. Strictly business. That elegant steel-cased affair was safely stashed in an anonymous locker in one of the classroom buildings. Who would look for it there?

No, this laptop was a pretty standard-issue college student machine. The screen flashed to life when he nudged it. Whoever owned it never installed a password protection on it. Stupid.

He froze when he saw the screen, though.

A tube site. A porn tube site. Free streaming video. Not great quality, obviously taken from a phone camera. A man, spread eagled on a bed, getting gang fucked, while two or three others drank, smoked and jeered. Himself. Unmistakably. His own slack jawed face was completely visible. When had that happened? He shuddered involuntarily. His stomach heaved, and he added incrementally to the cesspool that was gathered in the toilet.

The stink. Ugh.

He retched again.

When he could stand, he stared again at the laptop. The video. It had been taken and uploaded in the night. It was on someone's phone. No way to retrieve it. And if it was out, it could be anywhere. Everywhere.

He'd been used like a whore. Like a party boy.

It was then that it hit him, hard; an almost physical blow harder than any part of this disaster had dealt him. This was his own work. He'd trapped others into making his events more unusual, more hedonistic, more outrageous each time, all for his own fun and considerable profit, and at little cost to himself.

If he felt like a victim, well, so what? Turnabout was supposed to be fair play. Fair or not, it made him sick. Maybe it was the pills, an aftereffect of the chemicals in his system. Maybe it was something he'd walled off inside after leaving home. Conscience.

Voices and faces of people he'd hurt, people he'd used, people he'd sold. Their eyes, fearful or stoned, appeared to his vision. He heard their manic laughter or cries of hurt echoed in his ears. Every one of them seemed to fill the cramped, stinking space, crowding in on him, on his mind, on every sense he possessed. He shut his eyes, willing the apparitions to disappear.

They faded, but failed to vanish into the miasma that was the bathroom.

Shaking, he slipped out into social area. He drifted to the entry foyer and stared at the wreckage of the apartment. He couldn't face anyone right now. He told himself that he needed to eat, though his stomach was sending the opposite message. Maybe he'd come back in a while, after everyone had left, and he could confront the disaster this weekend had been.

He heard someone moving. Someone in the living room. He thought he recognized Ted's low growl. His roommate's higher voice responded sleepily with a simpering chuckle a second later. A chill ran down his spine.

He fled.

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On 01/30/2017 09:17 AM, Geron Kees said:

Well, it can happen. Sometimes, even those with no apparent conscience can suddenly discover it was there all along. I don't know if this is quite our boy or not. He has thus far been portrayed as a savage - and someone who has acted like he has to this point would not be contemplating remorse so much as revenge. I am going to have to wait and see where you go next before deciding.

You've definitely got my interest by the...scruff of the neck. :)

The Predator may yet discover his still, small inner voice. He has been through a harrowing experience. If it had no effect on him, that would be less believable. Perhaps for the first time, he understands fear. Hope your neck recovers. Many thanks for having read thus far. I know it has not been easy.

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He is callous, certainly, savage..possibly. Reprehensible, absolutely. Right now he is probably nursing his hurt more than anything else.

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I think two general outcomes could happen from an experience like this. Either the person will be in fact broken, and stop what they were doing, for reasons like conscience or even simple fear (as in, they would keep doing it, if not for the fear of something like this hapṕening again); or they would double down, since stopping would require accepting just how badly they screwed up and that they do in fact have a conscience.

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On June 15, 2017 at 2:17 PM, David Santos said:

I think two general outcomes could happen from an experience like this. Either the person will be in fact broken, and stop what they were doing, for reasons like conscience or even simple fear (as in, they would keep doing it, if not for the fear of something like this hapṕening again); or they would double down, since stopping would require accepting just how badly they screwed up and that they do in fact have a conscience.

 

Of course, it remains to be seen what our main character will do. In the large picture, you're probably right, but for the immediate future, he may have some muddling around and mind sorting to do. Many thanks for reading, and for your patience. 

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This is disturbingly well written.  Every aspect of it is so vivid.  The realization that Everything had been taken from him.  He'd been gang raped, robbed, and even videoed for the whole world to see.  Unless the roommate had already made arrangements to move elsewhere, I guess he didn't care if his dorm suite was totally trashed.  Personally I'd have wanted to shower knowing everything I was covered with, but can understand getting dressed, investigating, and upon hearing the new king of the jungle awakening, wanting to flee.  The feeling of knowing you aren't strong enough to fight the person that already took everything including your illusion of yourself, all he could do is run.

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21 hours ago, WolfM said:

This is disturbingly well written.  Every aspect of it is so vivid.  The realization that Everything had been taken from him.  He'd been gang raped, robbed, and even videoed for the whole world to see.  Unless the roommate had already made arrangements to move elsewhere, I guess he didn't care if his dorm suite was totally trashed.  Personally I'd have wanted to shower knowing everything I was covered with, but can understand getting dressed, investigating, and upon hearing the new king of the jungle awakening, wanting to flee.  The feeling of knowing you aren't strong enough to fight the person that already took everything including your illusion of yourself, all he could do is run.

 

Everything is gone, except his laptop. Phone, capital, goods, everything that made his predatory existence possible. A shower might have been good - but with the bathroom reeking and trashed, and then the shock of the video - flight seemed like the option to take. 

 

I am glad you thought this vivid. I could smell the place even as I wrote. Thank you for reading and responding to this. 

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Run, you bastard! Run and hide! Maybe you can find your laptop if it's where you left it. Maybe you can get your identity back. The rest? prolly not.

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6 hours ago, BlueWindBoy said:

Run, you bastard! Run and hide! Maybe you can find your laptop if it's where you left it. Maybe you can get your identity back. The rest? prolly not.

No, everything appears to be gone. But running seems like the smartest move. But where to? Right now, no place seems very safe. Thanks for reading and commenting. 

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