The Poetry of D/s - 5. clay

you've described a very special moment, tim... a sculptor, shaping his clay; an artist, connecting with his muse... nicely done, boy.

Mmm, Mac has said it perfectly.  A beautiful poem, boy.

your words transport me to different times and places each time i read through it

in the final stanza i can feel muscles still slightly strained

and the quiet smile of peace

again, and every time, thank you for sharing your gift with us

A deeply personal and beautiful moment. Expressed with great love and respect. Well done tim. xo

7 hours ago, MacGreg said:

you've described a very special moment, tim... a sculptor, shaping his clay; an artist, connecting with his muse... nicely done, boy.

thank You, Sir. it's a life filled many special moments

7 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

Mmm, Mac has said it perfectly.  A beautiful poem, boy.

thank You, Sir  D/s has its own beauty i try to capture it xo

7 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

For me, it is the final stanza that connects with me the most. The sculptor is pleased; this is what matters, what fulfills. 

 

 

Thank you Parker. I appreciate you reading and your comments. It is very much about fulfillment. 

7 hours ago, mollyhousemouse said:

your words transport me to different times and places each time i read through it

in the final stanza i can feel muscles still slightly strained

and the quiet smile of peace

 

 

again, and every time, thank you for sharing your gift with us

i'm smiling now, because i know you know. it is a peaceful and emotional time ... thanks for your friendship and support molly.... xoxo

7 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

A deeply personal and beautiful moment. Expressed with great love and respect. Well done tim. xo

and you know, too jp.  you know the poetry in this life, the give and take of it... thanks for reading it my friend xo

I love that, and maybe because of the sculptor metaphor, I can almost feel this poem. Make sense? 

Well done, tim. 

19 minutes ago, Reader1810 said:

Your peace brings me peace. I could feel it with every word I read...

 

Nicely done, tim  

for me it can be a very peaceful time xoxo thanks Reader

4 minutes ago, Defiance19 said:

I love that, and maybe because of the sculptor metaphor, I can almost feel this poem. Make sense? 

Well done, tim. 

thanks Def ... it is almost like that, because you're giving someone all the control.. thanks for reading and your comments

I am having trouble putting my feelings into words. I don't understand D/s on an emotional level, but this poem really appeals to me. Maybe it is the sculptor metaphor like Defiance19 said. Anyway, thank you.

4 hours ago, JeffreyL said:

I am having trouble putting my feelings into words. I don't understand D/s on an emotional level, but this poem really appeals to me. Maybe it is the sculptor metaphor like Defiance19 said. Anyway, thank you.

thank you, JeffreyL. emotion plays a huge part to me, but there is so much more that enters into it. D/s is not bullies and odd people, many of us are bright and intelligent, we love deeply and care very much about each other.  even the few of us here, we mean a lot to each other.  i appreciate you reading these ... there are more scattered through my work, and a recent one that Macgreg and i wrote together.  thank you again. xo