Himmelszelt (Canopy of Heaven) - 1. Stargazer

Your poem reminded me on last August, and all the Sternschnuppen, I watched sharing it with someone dear. Thanks for bringing this memory back.

Love this!  

I fell in love with the rhythm and the way each line declaimed itself to me. This is exquisitely beautiful .

This poem has such a wonderful flow, like a song. Beautiful words.

14 hours ago, Lyssa said:

Your poem reminded me on last August, and all the Sternschnuppen, I watched sharing it with someone dear. Thanks for bringing this memory back.

I always try to watch them in August, and like you with someone dear. Thank you for your comment, Lyssa. Watching the nightly sky connects people.

13 hours ago, Valkyrie said:

I picture two people looking at the same stars, each hoping the other makes the same wish.   

Yes, even when they aren't at the same place or time. Thank you, Val. 

13 hours ago, Headstall said:

Love this!  

*hug* This is my favorite.

11 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

I fell in love with the rhythm and the way each line declaimed itself to me. This is exquisitely beautiful .

Thank you, Parker! This is close to my heart

2 hours ago, Thorn Wilde said:

This poem has such a wonderful flow, like a song. Beautiful words.

Thank you Thorn, I'm so glad you think so.

This is a very evocative and emotional poem. Poets not afraid to share of themselves are the real-deal in my book Thanks for this 

"The ebony cloth, pierced by ancient light

Enfolds us to become our sheltered place,"

This is beautiful. Such yearning for loving companionship when it may not be achieved, is also immensely sad.

4 hours ago, Rigby Taylor said:

"The ebony cloth, pierced by ancient light

Enfolds us to become our sheltered place,"

This is beautiful. Such yearning for loving companionship when it may not be achieved, is also immensely sad.

You point out the very heart of the poem --and mine.

On 5/24/2019 at 4:26 PM, AC Benus said:

This is a very evocative and emotional poem. Poets not afraid to share of themselves are the real-deal in my book Thanks for this 

I still balk at calling myself a poet. Thank you, AC, for your kind words.

This is beautiful, Adi. Love it.

9 hours ago, Defiance19 said:

This is beautiful, Adi. Love it.