Wolf Like Me v5 3. E-P-I-C

I fell in love with these characters as “Efrain and Cory” on Nifty and “Wolf Like Me” here (reading new chapters of W L M is what made me join GA so thank you.) I’m onboard for and look forward to this version as well. 
 

Welcome back.

Hey Dayne, apart from differences in style that come with getting better at writing, how different Is the story, the plot?

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Omg you’re alive!!! I can’t wait to read your new writings!!!😍

8 hours ago, Sweetlion said:

Hey Dayne, apart from differences in style that come with getting better at writing, how different Is the story, the plot?

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I neglected a few plot lines when I first wrote WLM--like, the fact that there should be friction between Efrain and Cory because Rain's a total Narnia boy and Cory came to VT specifically because he didn't want to be in the closet anymore.  Kind of a glaring plothole, especially when Cory starts sharing their relationship with more of their friends.  The characters should have some more depth to them, which I developed through extended dialogue and narration (you'll see this in ch 3 with Al, Gio and Romero, but I've also put in some work on them in earlier sections).  Previously, side characters were just randos with names and weren't given much consideration until I needed them for something.

4 hours ago, sapphire2619 said:

Omg you’re alive!!! I can’t wait to read your new writings!!!😍

I'm hanging in there!

On 1/14/2020 at 2:02 AM, FanLit said:

I fell in love with these characters as “Efrain and Cory” on Nifty and “Wolf Like Me” here (reading new chapters of W L M is what made me join GA so thank you.) I’m onboard for and look forward to this version as well. 
 

Welcome back.

Oh God, I avoid Nifty just so I don't have to be reminded of just how bad I sounded back then. lol  I'm glad you're here on GA--there's lots more talent to find here (and significantly fewer stories that involve pee).

Woo Hoo❣️❣️
Seeing chapter 5 update made my day❣️❣️
I’ve liked the improvements so far.

Blessed safety to you and your loved ones. 💛

I'm really missing these guys they are definitely some of my favorite characters out of all the stories I've read here on GA.