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Double Concerto - 12. Obbligato

A Rita Warning has been posted for this chapter.

"Thanks for coming so fast."

Rick started. He'd been on another planet, daydreaming. It wasn't the first time that day, either. He'd spent far too long getting dressed that morning, thinking and yearning. Memories of amused brown eyes and honey brown skin kept occluding the front of his brain.

"It was real nice of you to come on out."

Now that he really heard them, Rick appreciated the words. It was nice to know someone was grateful when he dropped whatever he was doing and jumped in his truck.

In this case, the speaker was Louis Schwarz. The long-faced old man still stood erect and tall after eighty-three years.

"No problem, Mr. Schwarz."

"It's quite a ways to drive from Eagle Lake just for a clogged pipe."

"You've been customers for fifty years. You can't get rid of us that easily."

"We tried moving out of town after I retired. Built this house. Still couldn't get rid of you."

Even through the wry smile and the joking, Rick could hear the sadness in the old man's voice. The kitchen in which they stood was clean and bright, but it had been designed for a couple with a crowd of grandchildren.

"Well, it wasn't too bad today, Mr. Schwarz. Not sure what blocked that drainage line, but it's clear now."

In reality, it had been a real bitch of a job. The line had been packed with some kind of paper towels, all wadded and compacted. There was a very good chance the old man was becoming forgetful. At least the line was clean, even if he looked like a mess.

He tried to change the subject. "Any of your kids coming back for the Fourth of July?"

"Amy's coming back with her husband, and maybe their new grandbaby."

"Wow, great-grandchildren, Mr. Schwarz?"

"Yup. Little Kayleigh is the second. Wish my missus were here to see it. She'd have loved them."

Rick continued to pack up his equipment. "Sounds like you do, too, that's for sure. Will you take them to the fireworks?"

Mr. Schwarz brightened. "Oh, sure. Can't miss that. It wouldn't be Independence Day without going to see the fireworks."

"Nope. It sure wouldn't."

The older man shifted. "Maybe you can tell me what I owe you."

Rick smiled. All the old-timers found an indirect way to sidle up to the subject of the bill.

"Well, it shouldn't be too bad. You want me to send it to you?"

"No, thank you, Rick. I'd prefer to settle up now."

"Okay, sure."

He withdrew his notepad and a pencil from his pocket and jotted down some figures. He pretended to do some arithmetic, but Rick already knew he wasn't going to charge the lonely old man the full rate. He was a longtime customer, after all. He could get a discount.

"I figure it to be about $180, Mr. Schwarz."

"Let me get my checkbook." The old man walked out of the kitchen.

Rick liked the look of the house. Big double-insulated windows let in plenty of light, and gave a great view over a wide expanse of lawn to the woods which surrounded the property. Still, he wondered if the place wasn't just too much for Mr. Schwarz, all alone.

He sometimes thought the same thing about his own house. It was kind of big for just one person. He never used the so-called dining room, and he rarely used the living room except in winter. And the spare room upstairs would go unoccupied until his father visited in July. That dreaded event was coming up soon. Rick frowned. Cleaning that space out represented just one more chore to get done.

He let a long breath escape.

It would be nice to be able to share his own house with someone, Rick reflected. How would the place feel with another person living there? His daydream conjured a summer morning; he'd be drinking coffee at the little table with… Gus. Rick shook his head to clear it. He wasn't going to go there, not again today. Gus was far, far out of his league, let alone partnered to someone else. But the cast on Gus' arm what was it the man said? – they'd had a disagreement? What did that mean? Maybe Gus would change his mind about women.

Rick grimaced and sighed. Such dreaming was completely futile. Chances were good they'd never cross paths another time, unless he did something completely obvious like paddling over again to Cedarcrest some evening after work.

"Here you go." Louis Schwarz had returned. His outstretched hand held a light blue check.

"Thanks. Call me anytime if you need something." Rick smiled as he pocketed the flimsy paper rectangle.

"I'll do that."

Rick went out to his truck. He grabbed his cell phone off the seat and powered it on. He saw a pile of missed calls on the screen, and ignored them. There wasn't much he could do about them right then and there.

Instead, he took a moment to log onto X-Pants.com. Sure enough, his contact from the past few days, ‘SexyHunk,’ had sent him several messages.

“Looking forward to meeting up soon.”

“Coming to Eagle Lake. We should meet.”

Each was accompanied by a photo: a broad, fully-fleshed chest and belly, an obscured, heavy-featured face in profile, and with the third, a snapshot of a thick, flaccid cock.

“I’ll know where to find you.”

Rick blinked. He felt a chill in the hot confines of the van. This was getting weird. Did Rick know SexyHunk? How could he have figured out Rick’s identity? There was nothing recognizable on his profile; at least, he didn’t think so. Rick turned the ignition, suddenly eager to be on the road, as if he could leave those messages behind as he drove off.

The van rocked as it sped down the road. Second growth and tall forest flashed by, alternating with open farmland along the route back towards Eagle Lake. It was pretty country, rolling with low hills. Toward the south, the land got flatter and flatter as it opened up into real dairy country, but this this was patchy and rougher terrain.

Rick's phone sounded over the noise of the engine and pavement. One glance at the screen told him he had to take the call. He was a man in demand.

"Hang on, hang on a second, can't you?" he complained as cranked up the window. His must have been one of the last vehicles in Wisconsin not to have power windows. He reached over and hit the button on the gizmo he'd fitted to the old truck so he could take phone calls safely. "Hello?"

"Rick? It's Irene. I swear if that McKee woman calls me one more time today, I'm going to…"

"Whoa, whoa, hang on a second. Slow down. What's going on?" Rick sighed. He'd had a stretch of two or three days that were relatively McKee-free.

"She's been calling every ten minutes; says she can't find you, and your phone is off, and she doesn't know where you are."

"I left it in the truck. Didn't want to mess with it cleaning out a drain line. I don't really want to check my messages while I'm driving."

"I know, I know. Listen, can I at least tell her when you'll be back in town?"

"I'm about forty minutes away. What does she need?"

"She won't tell me, dammit."

Rick smiled. That was the real problem. Irene Inksater hated not knowing.

"Well, I guess she's going to have to wait until I get back."

"I told her that. What do I tell her if she calls again in the meantime?"

"How about you remind her to pay her bills?"

Irene cackled over the line. "Oh, sure, you bet! That'll teach the deadbeat…" The signal faltered as the truck passed along a steep dip in the road. "…a great idea."

"Glad you agree. Now I'm going to turn the phone off, so she won't call me." Rick wore a satisfied smile as he ended the call. That would deal with both Rita and Irene.

With the phone off, he could try to tune out the world on the rest of the drive back to town. He let his mind wander back to Sunday. Rick savored the memory of taking Gus for a spin the canoe. It hadn't been very long, but details still lingered in his mind: the taut muscles on the man's arms, the transition of shoulder to collarbone to neck, and the way his eyes conveyed a sense of excitement and joy. Rick was certain Gus appreciated his time in the canoe. The open smile on the man's face gave it away.

There was a tense excitement in the pit of his stomach whenever he thought about the other man; and he'd been thinking about Gus since he rose not long after daybreak. He had a crush, and he knew it. It was completely unreasonable, dangerous, even. Willy Kohler had been a disastrous infatuation – others had followed over the years, but none as catastrophic.

Gustavo Morales.

The previous night, Rick hadn't sat out on the lawn watching the sun turn the sky pink and purple and orange as it set over the lake. Instead, he'd been at his old computer, searching the Internet for anything on Gustavo Morales. As it happened, he found pages of hits.

He followed dozens of links to glowing reviews in newspapers from around the world. New York, Washington, Los Angeles, Chicago, Berlin, Mumbai, Tokyo, Hong Kong – it was a very long list. And there were links to several social media sites, with a selection of photos added. Rick had pored over these. Gus looked fantastic in a tux, or with his hand upraised in the spotlight on a concert stage. Then he'd Googled images of Gus – and spent a long, long time looking at an incredible album cover. The camera caught him in a ray of sunlight cast over a piano, transfiguring his face and neck. It didn’t hurt that Gus' shirt was artfully unbuttoned, either.

Rick felt embarrassed after a while. He felt like he'd been spying, perving on the man who had taken him up on a chance to go out in his canoe. Of course, despite his own efforts not to stare, Rick couldn't help having looked at Gus in the boat, either.

Then he felt ridiculous – of course it's okay to look, isn't it? Weren't those pictures put on the Net with Gus' permission? And besides, it's not as if you haven't been on the Internet before.

More troubling to Rick was the Wiki page displaying a brief biography.

"Gustavo Morales was born in Guatemala in 1979. The Chicago-based concert pianist maintains a high international reputation and busy travel schedule. In symphonic and concerto work, he has played with numerous orchestras across the world. Frequently appearing in concert with his longtime partner Helene Deveaux…"

Rick barely glanced at the rest. Longtime partner. The phrase echoed in Rick's mind. Then there were the pictures of Gus with the black-haired woman Rick had seen at the Meadowview Inn. Several showed them receiving ovations at concerts. She held a violin in one hand, while she held Gus' hand with the other. Rick frowned at a series of photos taken at a swank charity party somewhere. In each of them, the woman – was this the Helene who put Gus in a cast? – had a possessive arm wrapped around Gus.

Rick didn't understand everything, but he understood the woman's message in those pictures. Gus was hers.

He chewed his lower lip at the thought.

This is just plain stupid. I don't need a summer obsession with a guy who wouldn't want me. I've got enough trouble with the Old Man coming and Rita McKee wanting this and that – and not paying her bills. There’s mister SexyHunk out on the internet itching to get together for a hookup. That ought to be more than enough.

Thinking about Rita thoroughly spoiled Rick's mood as he drove into town. He could try stopping at her office on his way back, but he inwardly cringed at the idea. The last time had been bad enough, and she hadn't even been there. Soon the houses became closer together; traffic picked up and the road wasn't lonely anymore. The road changed its name from County Route 46 to Riverside Street. He slowed the truck.

The smartest thing to do would be to call her back. Keep it short that way.

Rick hesitated. He could also ignore her and just go back to the shop; let Irene handle it. Except Rita didn't want to trust Irene with whatever she thought was so important. She wanted Rick on the line. Over the scrubby bushes and young trees, he caught a glimpse of a tall, bulbous pale-blue municipal water tower in the distance. He was back in Eagle Lake.

On Rick's left, a flat space opened up. There had been a railyard for lumber and ore trains between the road and the water once; timber that floated down the lake could be loaded up right from the shore. Those days were long gone; the railroads had gone bankrupt and weeds ruled the open acreage now. But there was no curb, and it was a good open place where he could pull the truck over and get off the road; a great place for a cell phone call. Rick maneuvered to cross the other lane, pulling the old truck onto the gravel and grass.

He pulled out his phone and powered it on; he tapped in Rita's number.

She answered on the second ring. "Ricky! It's about time you called! Where have you been? That awful Irene woman – "

"I've been up to my armpits in drain line, Rita, over in Essex."

"But you couldn't even return my messages after you cleaned up?" At least Rita sounded excited, not angry or demanding.

"Not while I was driving. I'm pulled over on the side of the road where I have some good signal." Rick conveniently neglected to mention he was in Eagle Lake already.

"Well, the reason I've been calling is that I've made a huge sale, Ricky. Absolutely huge."

"That's great."

"Ricky, you don't understand, this is the start of it – all my plans – with the commission from this sale, I can get to work on financing the project. I’m going to remake Eagle Lake!"

"It's that much, is it?"

"It's enough capital to draw in some private financing, if I can sell it right. And you know I can sell it! Then I can talk to my contacts at Chase and BMO in Madison. Oh, Ricky, it's really going to happen!"

"Uh, that's good news then, Rita. But can I mention something? You still owe Ernst and Son eight hundred dollars for work I've done over the last month. That's getting close to a thousand."

"Oh, don't go spoiling everything. Of course you'll get paid."

"I'm sorry, but I've got to get all the accounts reckoned up and cleared by July."

"Why July?"

"Our fiscal year ends on June 30th." Rick didn't explain that the date was chosen to be convenient for his father's summer visitation.

"Isn't that very soon? I don't know…"

"Sounds like you ought to have the funds. What place did you broker?"

"It's that beautiful old summer lodge on the north side of the lake – Cedarcrest. I found a buyer for the Kohler family. You fixed their furnace, remember?"

Rick suddenly felt as if the sun had dimmed. The blue sky appeared to have gone a dull grey. The old railyard seemed to crumble a little more.

"Yes…yes, um, I remember."

"Well, it sold for one-point-eight million dollars, Ricky! When it closes, I can take that commission and get started. There are some big investors I know…"

Rick let the woman talk. If Cedarcrest was sold, Gus would be leaving town, off to his career in Chicago or London or wherever. He'd forget all about little Eagle Lake and the hour he spent in Rick's old canoe.

And Rick would be alone again, with his impossible dreams. SexyHunk looked more and more likely.

"…but the first thing is going to be getting the people in town on board, don't you agree?" Rita was still gabbling.

"Yeah, sure."

"And that's where you're going to come in, you can be generating enthusiasm. But even all that's going to have to wait until after the closing."

Rick felt a ray of hope. Maybe he still had a little time. "The closing? When is that supposed to be?"

"Not until July, Ricky, but it will be here before you know it. Oh, there's so much to be done before then, so much. And there will be business, too, lots more!"

"I'm happy for you, Rita."

"You know what? We need to celebrate. We can get a group together and have a party. What do you think?"

"I think you can celebrate by writing me a check for eight hundred dollars."

There was silence for a moment. "That's not a very nice joke, Ricky. But I understand. You've been working in a slimy pit all morning, so you're forgiven. Why don't you go home and get cleaned up and meet me for lunch at the Hob Nob Café near my office? We have so much planning to do!"

"I don't know, Rita. I still have…"

"Great. I'll see you there, in maybe half an hour?" The woman clearly wasn't listening.

"But…"

"And did I tell you I had the nicest card from your father? He said how much he appreciated our working together, and he looks forward to meeting me when he comes to visit in a couple of weeks. He’s already starting the ball rolling!"

Damn, damn, damn. Heinrich Senior just had to get involved, didn't he? And why hasn't he called me with his travel plans?

Aloud, he said: "I'm glad he's telling you so."

"Well, I won't keep you any more, Ricky. I'll see you soon at the Hob Nob."

The call ended.

He wanted to turn the truck around and drive back to Essex and the Schwarz house. He wanted to get started on the rest of the jobs for the day. He wished Irene would call with a crisis, an emergency. But none of those things were going to happen.

Rick was going to speed home, clean up, and eat lunch at the Hob Nob – and no doubt half of Eagle Lake would know about it, along with his father. At least the news might keep the old man quiet for a few days.

If Rick was lucky, he'd get food poisoning.


My ongoing thanks go to @AC Benus and @Carlos Hazday for their kind help in making this story better. If you feel moved to leave a comment, diatribe or diversion, just know I appreciate anything you may choose to write.
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Instead of real estate, Rita should be selling snake oil patent medicines out of the back of a traveling wagon.

Just a suggestion, Mr. Owens. :P

 

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40 minutes ago, Carlos Hazday said:

@Sweetlion I think Rick's wishy-washy personality has most of us frustrated.

@Parker Owens The old man saddens me. I can imagine how lonely he is, I saw it in my father after Mom died. Isolation due to COVID accelerated his decline. The forgetfulness is heart breaking, and I saw that in my Dad when he constantly asked why I wasn't going to see him and take him to lunch.

As for the Rita warning, how about calling a spade a spade? It could well read: WARNING Manipulative bitch continues to drive MC nuts.

Rick stalking Gus on social media's more prevalent than Rick could ever imagine.

 

36 minutes ago, Carlos Hazday said:

Instead of real estate, Rita should be selling snake oil patent medicines out of the back of a traveling wagon.

Just a suggestion, Mr. Owens. :P

 

Rita might be good at snake oil sales, or perhaps cold fusion. Perhaps she needs her own late night TV infomercial.
 

Mr. Schwartz saddens me too. Things didn’t pan out as he had planned, and now his dream home is too big for him. His isolation accentuates his growing forgetfulness. 
 

Gus must be aware of fans who dig for pics and info about him.  I expect his agents are even more aware of it, enough to micromanage his online presence. Rick is surely not alone in his search for more. 
 

Thanks for your help and comments!

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Rita Skeeter is one pushy deadbeat who won’t take no for an answer or ya know....pay her bills 🙄 

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8 hours ago, NimirRaj said:

Rita Skeeter is one pushy deadbeat who won’t take no for an answer or ya know....pay her bills 🙄 

I’m sure she believes that the best defense is a good offense. I love the connection you made with Rita’s name. It was utterly unintentional. Thanks for reading and for your comments!

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There was certainly something foreboding about SexyHunk's last message. It really upped the probability in my mind that he is Willy Kohler coming back for something more from Rick. The closing on the house would be consistent with him having to be in Eagle Lake. Again, I hope Willy, Rita, and Heinrich Sr. manage to have a 3-way... collision -- one that takes them all out of Rick's life.

One thing about Rick's lack of "Testicular Fortitude", as a previous reader called it: it is frustrating, but it is also not unusual in isolated, small towns in Appalachia (where I grew up), and I expect the same is true in the Midwest, based on my observations. I think closeted gay men may be especially prone: they do not want questions asked about being single, etc., so it is easier just to be more passive and not provoke attention.

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1 hour ago, Dr. John NYC said:

There was certainly something foreboding about SexyHunk's last message. It really upped the probability in my mind that he is Willy Kohler coming back for something more from Rick.

 

Oh please no!!!

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2 hours ago, Dr. John NYC said:

There was certainly something foreboding about SexyHunk's last message. It really upped the probability in my mind that he is Willy Kohler coming back for something more from Rick. The closing on the house would be consistent with him having to be in Eagle Lake. Again, I hope Willy, Rita, and Heinrich Sr. manage to have a 3-way... collision -- one that takes them all out of Rick's life.

One thing about Rick's lack of "Testicular Fortitude", as a previous reader called it: it is frustrating, but it is also not unusual in isolated, small towns in Appalachia (where I grew up), and I expect the same is true in the Midwest, based on my observations. I think closeted gay men may be especially prone: they do not want questions asked about being single, etc., so it is easier just to be more passive and not provoke attention.

I enjoyed reading your comments. Thank you so very much for them. Rick checks his X-Pants messages, perhaps just to feel connected to people like himself. SexyHunk may not be someone who understands, and it could be that Rick might not understand or want to be friends with that shadowy figure, either. Even though he seems a bit creepy, the guy is the surest thing since Marshall. I’m glad too of your understanding of Rick’s small town frustrations and constrictions. I’m grateful you are reading the story. Many thanks. 
 

Oh, and the image of Willy, Rita and Heinrich Senior having a three way made me laugh!

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Rick really needs to sort out his finances, he has a shop does he really need it? 
does he need to keep Irene on? Apart from some bookkeeping and answering call, what else does she do? She should be chasing Rita for her unpaid invoices. If Irene was to go he could use as Virtual PA do it all and he would save money, as the old man is still involved I think he may struggle to do this. Does any of this benefit the business?  He also needs to look at how much he charges people for the jobs that he does, increase his prices a bit, no discounts we also knows that he under values his work by doing all of this. Then maybe he can buy a new van, it looks unprofessional turning up in an old clapped out work van. He also needs to revamp his image a bit. 
And don’t get involved with any of Rita’s schemes, I think that she is Trouble. 
I think that Gus and Helene have broken up if ever they were a couple and he has bought the Kolher place. Or is this my wishful thinking?? ❤️🌈🥰

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On 11/19/2020 at 8:53 PM, Carlos Hazday said:

Instead of real estate, Rita should be selling snake oil patent medicines out of the back of a traveling wagon.

Just a suggestion, Mr. Owens. :P

 

OOh a gypsy. 

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On 11/22/2020 at 12:57 AM, weinerdog said:

Oh please no!!!

I had that horrible thought too, but I am secretly hoping that it’s Gus. 🥰🤞

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On 11/20/2020 at 12:32 PM, Parker Owens said:

I’m sure she believes that the best defense is a good offense. I love the connection you made with Rita’s name. It was utterly unintentional. Thanks for reading and for your comments!

I also called her that in a comment I made in a previous chapter, it’s funny how a few of us get this connection 

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4 hours ago, Bft said:

Rick really needs to sort out his finances, he has a shop does he really need it? 
does he need to keep Irene on? Apart from some bookkeeping and answering call, what else does she do? She should be chasing Rita for her unpaid invoices. If Irene was to go he could use as Virtual PA do it all and he would save money, as the old man is still involved I think he may struggle to do this. Does any of this benefit the business?  He also needs to look at how much he charges people for the jobs that he does, increase his prices a bit, no discounts we also knows that he under values his work by doing all of this. Then maybe he can buy a new van, it looks unprofessional turning up in an old clapped out work van. He also needs to revamp his image a bit. 
And don’t get involved with any of Rita’s schemes, I think that she is Trouble. 
I think that Gus and Helene have broken up if ever they were a couple and he has bought the Kolher place. Or is this my wishful thinking?? ❤️🌈🥰

Heinrich Senior still owns the business; his son Rick does the work in the expectation that he’ll inherit one day. He hasn’t left because if he did, he’d walk away with very little, and have to start over - not at all an easy thing to do. Modernization hasn’t crossed the old man’s mind, as he hates to spend a penny. Rick has campaigned for a new van for years to no avail. 

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4 hours ago, Bft said:

OOh a gypsy. 

Rita could sell anything, to anyone. Give her credit, she’s a very good at sales. 

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4 hours ago, Bft said:

I had that horrible thought too, but I am secretly hoping that it’s Gus. 🥰🤞

More is coming on that.

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As an old ( 89 my next Birthday) gay man and (unpunlished) author, I am overwhelmed at the comments you are receiving, yes, an author who writes an interesting story can expect pleas to publish faster and write longer chapters, but the HUGE number of comments you are receiving, and the DEPTH of their analyses, lead me to believe you have a very interested and discerning audience – I am also amazed and pleased at your character development. Rita is exactly the type of female who makes me happy that I am gay, and Rick, finally mentioning the money she owes is just beginning to be the worm that turns. I can see Rita and Rick's Father striking sparks when they meet and ride off into the Arizona sunset together – they deserve each other! I feel that Gus is the proper character to buy Cedarcrest as he is the one who would be making the highest income from his touring, and I am a little worried about the potential loss of agility in his right hand – will he be able to reover quickly when the cast finally comes off?
Oh so many threads! I am aware that it is many moons since this story was first published and all the threads have been untangled by this time, but I am really enjoying your command of the story and your suspensful writing style.

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9 hours ago, Will Hawkins said:

As an old ( 89 my next Birthday) gay man and (unpunlished) author, I am overwhelmed at the comments you are receiving, yes, an author who writes an interesting story can expect pleas to publish faster and write longer chapters, but the HUGE number of comments you are receiving, and the DEPTH of their analyses, lead me to believe you have a very interested and discerning audience – I am also amazed and pleased at your character development. Rita is exactly the type of female who makes me happy that I am gay, and Rick, finally mentioning the money she owes is just beginning to be the worm that turns. I can see Rita and Rick's Father striking sparks when they meet and ride off into the Arizona sunset together – they deserve each other! I feel that Gus is the proper character to buy Cedarcrest as he is the one who would be making the highest income from his touring, and I am a little worried about the potential loss of agility in his right hand – will he be able to reover quickly when the cast finally comes off?
Oh so many threads! I am aware that it is many moons since this story was first published and all the threads have been untangled by this time, but I am really enjoying your command of the story and your suspensful writing style.

You are amazingly kind in your comments. I am grateful for your encouraging words. There are many threads in this tale, and I fear not all of them are susceptible to being tied up. I very much love the idea of Rita and Heinrich being forced to ride off into the sunset together - thought Heinrich's current wife might have something to say about that. Cedarcrest is in my mind a wonderful house owned by odious people.  Gus is indeed the right kind of man to change the karma of that place. Gus' cast will come off one day, and we'll see how that goes. Once again, my deep thanks for your reading, and for your comments.

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