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a Glass Floor Underfoot - 8. The Fictitious Real-World Hypocrites

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Den fiktiven Realheuchlern

 

Was frommt, wieviel ihr

schafft u[nd] schaut –

Wenn ihr nur Euch vermeinet.

Bemüht am Bild von

Welten baut,

Vom All der

Welt verneinet,

Euch weder Gott noch Wesen traut,

noch liebend zweit und einet . . .

Zum Menschenbild,

des Keim euch ward,

Quert hundertmal noch Wieg'

u[nd] Grab,

Oh weh, wie viel

zu weinen. [i]

 

 

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The Fictitious Real-World Hypocrites

 

How sanctimonious, for however much

one creates and observes –

It's but mere reflections of the self.

Struggle to construct a metaphor

for the world around us,

To distance yourself from both

the Earth and the cosmos,

Trusting in neither God nor living being,

not loving the one or the other . . .

You are the seed-germ,

to the spitting-image of man,

Who's been crossed a hundred times over

with the cradle and the grave,

Because, there is much about

which to weep.

 

 

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Lyonel Feininger People at Sea (1921)

 

 

 

 

 

[i] Den fiktiven Realheuchlern (“The Fictitious Real-World Hypocrites”)

Letter to Erwin Loewenson, June 23rd, 1914

 

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37 minutes ago, Backwoods Boy said:

What I acquire here is a very strong feeling of isolation.

Thank you, Jon. I'll take the opportunity to mention here that this poem was among the most difficult to translate. I started with the usual desire to match the structure of the original (its stanza pattern; metre; rhymes or lack there of; etc.), but found it impossible with this poem. The original overflows with ideas and images that uses many fewer words in German than English. 

In the end, I almost gave, but then decided to set form aside and just say what the poet is saying. After that, I was able to arrange both the original and my version into a pattern that could resemble one another.

And the title! Wow, so hard. Hopefully what I've used is reasonably reflective of English-language thinking patterns, but I'm not so sure 

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