Time and Nature - 1. Chapter 1

Wonderful job, tim. 

I'm coming around to this whole poetry thing. Thank you for expanding my world. 

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7 hours ago, kbois said:

Wonderful job, tim. 

I'm coming around to this whole poetry thing. Thank you for expanding my world. 

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That's the best thing i've heard in a long while. Poetry can say so much. Thanks for reading these.

you already know I love these.

The final one, in particular, grabs me. It's longing but hopeful, and there's something beautifuly human in that.

Like @Wayne Gray, I fell in love with Number 5 immediately. It’s beautiful. I can recognize myself in Number 3; I can feel the change of seasons. I shivered at Number 4 as I pictured the fools in their shorts, and again when I read about the wind making skeletons of every tree. These make a fantastic set.

I love all of these.

Thanks for writing these tim x

All of these were truly well done; but 2 and 3 really touched something in me; I think because of my age, they resonated more with me than the others but so enjoyed them all.  

23 hours ago, Wayne Gray said:

you already know I love these.

The final one, in particular, grabs me. It's longing but hopeful, and there's something beautifuly human in that.

Thank you Wayne.

22 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Like @Wayne Gray, I fell in love with Number 5 immediately. It’s beautiful. I can recognize myself in Number 3; I can feel the change of seasons. I shivered at Number 4 as I pictured the fools in their shorts, and again when I read about the wind making skeletons of every tree. These make a fantastic set.

Thanks Parker. I'm glad some of these moved you and you felt compelled to say so.  

21 hours ago, chris191070 said:

I love all of these.

Thanks for writing these tim x

Thanks, chris. i am grateful to you for reading them.

9 hours ago, centexhairysub said:

All of these were truly well done; but 2 and 3 really touched something in me; I think because of my age, they resonated more with me than the others but so enjoyed them all.  

Thank you for reading them. I'm glad you liked 2. As the author, it's very clear I wasn't sure whether people would get it, but I'm delighted that some did. Thanks again for your comments and for reading these.

56 minutes ago, Reader1810 said:

These are wonderful, tim! 

As always, nicely done.  

Thank you, Reader.  i'm happy you enjoyed them. xo

#5 might be about another person, but your words took me to that place where I am missing myself... and that serenity and peace of mind when my world feels in balance. At any rate, a superb poem.

I've traveled in canoes and on rafts during my time on earth. I think I needed both, but I'll always choose the canoe now.   Another great poem. 

I felt the fear and darkness of #1, but it works so well with the last word being 'hope'. Thanks for these. Cheers.

20 hours ago, Headstall said:

#5 might be about another person, but your words took me to that place where I am missing myself... and that serenity and peace of mind when my world feels in balance. At any rate, a superb poem.

I've traveled in canoes and on rafts during my time on earth. I think I needed both, but I'll always choose the canoe now.   Another great poem. 

I felt the fear and darkness of #1, but it works so well with the last word being 'hope'. Thanks for these. Cheers.

There's always hope, Gary. I like your take on 5. I hope you find that place. I know what it's like not to have peace. Canoes feel like the best place for me as well. I admire those raft riders from afar. Thanks for reading and your comments.

A wonderful collection of poems, Tim.  I really enjoyed them, especially your final poem.  Thank you for sharing. 

5 hours ago, Bill W said:

A wonderful collection of poems, Tim.  I really enjoyed them, especially your final poem.  Thank you for sharing. 

Thank you for reading them, Bill. Number 5 seems to be a favourite. It's more of a classic style. Anyway, thanks again!