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Pride Month, and other Haibun - 3. ...the shortest Haibun ever....

...the shortest Haibun ever....

 

Don't you hate one-sided arguments.

 

Temerity sounds

More ominous than thunder

In a slamming door.

 

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The content presented here is for informational or educational purposes only. These are just the authors' personal opinions and knowledge.
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Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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On 10/27/2017 at 11:04 AM, Headstall said:

So true....

Thanks, Gary. I appreciate your comment. 

 

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I had to look up temerity. Learning something new is always a good thing.

 

PS: I liked the Haibun too. :) 

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10 minutes ago, Reader1810 said:

I had to look up temerity. Learning something new is always a good thing.

 

PS: I liked the Haibun too. :) 

Thanks, Reader. I appreciate your comments

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Evocative, powerful and direct. All kinds of images are released with the interior sounds of this poem. This is terrific. 

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2 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Evocative, powerful and direct. All kinds of images are released with the interior sounds of this poem. This is terrific. 

Thanks, Parker, I appreciate it. Interior, yes, that's a good word to use in connection with this poem.

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14 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

So much said in so few words. Knew that feeling long ago. Hurtful to the core. Beautiful my friend.

Thank you, JP! Yes, unfortunately, I think this is a poem almost everyone can relate to. We humans need to be kinder to one another, imo....

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On 10/28/2017 at 12:22 PM, AC Benus said:

Thank you, JP! Yes, unfortunately, I think this is a poem almost everyone can relate to. We humans need to be kinder to one another, imo....

Yes, everyday and in every way, we do need to be kinder to each other.

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12 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

Yes, everyday and in every way, we do need to be kinder to each other.

Wholeheartedly agreed :yes: 

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