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Crossing the Moon 1. Crossing the Moon

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Elias didn't dream with wide-eyed wonder about the day he could seek out his mate or mates. He felt trapped, constricted in a world where Omegas weren't allowed to do anything for themselves...where Omegas couldn't even leave their community. But, then he received the biggest Khonsu stone that their werewolf community had ever seen. Just what did the Gods have in mind for him?

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Caz Pedroso

   8 of 8 members found this review helpful 8 / 8 members

I loved this story.

 

I came across it in a random search when I was looking for something new. Once I'd caught up to the then current chapter I was always keeping an eye out for the next one and pouncing on it as soon as it appeared. 

 

The characters really drew me in and I found myself really rooting for them and their mating. 

 

A wonderfully written story that will keep the reader on the edge of their seat and reading until they reach the equally wonderful ending. 

Response from the author:

I either just recently found the review response button, or it has been opened to co-authors. Either way, I am going to take advantage of it. It really is great to randomly find a new fun tale to read. We're glad you gave it a chance and enjoyed it!

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JeffreyL

   7 of 7 members found this review helpful 7 / 7 members

 This story is a twist on the usual supernatural being stories. Elias is an omega werewolf who is cared for and sheltered from most of life. He is not happy being sheltered. During a ceremony involving "magical" crystals, Elias discovers he may have more than one mate. The story is about Elias finding his mates and being out from under the thumb of his family. The plot is clever. The characters are well developed and likeable. The dialogue is right on, and the sex is hot!! This is a fun read, and I hated to see it end. I recommend this most enjoyable story. 

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I love your use of the words "magical crystals." That about sums it up nicely. We haven't seen the last of these guys, and we most definitely have not seen the last of this "universe."

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BlindAmbition

   7 of 7 members found this review helpful 7 / 7 members

A clever and unique spin on the we’re creature genre. Elias is an omega with a harem of mates. Watch them learn to adapt and understand their unusual family... as they protect their union from the god who might not approve.

Each character is different and lovable in their own way.

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We're glad you felt that the characters were all lovable in different ways! Thanks so much for taking the time to review!

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CheckeredPanda

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

For Elias, the sheltered werewolf omega, the time has come to find his mates... All five of them! Fun, sexy times follow, such as a meeting with a lovably perverted vampire.

 

I loved this story. Very lovable characters, sprinkled (more like covered) in some seriously hot sex, and there's even a plotline. Yay!  

 

I definitively recommend reading this story.

 

 

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Your first few lines sound like they would have made a better summary for the story. Thanks so much for giving this story a chance!

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cmk762

  

This was the first story I read by @HinderToyBL and I fell in love quickly with the characters and the amazing world they created. I lost sleep telling myself over and over again, 'Just one more chapter!' 

 

I'm a big fan of gay harem stories (which are kinda hard to find) so I was already primed to like it, but the depth of details even in side stories, the interesting use of gods and goddesses from Egyptian mythology, and the fact that there isn't any male pregnancy (which gets kinda old, at least for me) means that this book and these authors rank among my favorites. I'm a rereader of books I love and l know I'll be rereading this one in the future for sure...

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We can't say that we feel sorry for your losing sleep while reading, because we definitely lost sleep while writing it! Thanks so much for giving our stories a try!

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