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Pieces and Fragments - 5. when we danced

Mitchel and I loved to go dancing. Haven't known anyone like him in that regard.

shadows coalesce
into the form of you
and we dance in the darkness
never quite touching
for how does one caress the wind

in my mind you are there
as real
as the first time we touched
setting my skin ablaze
with the flame
of your passion

i see your smile
and hear your laugh
you say my name
and love erupts from deep within
bathing my soul in willing abandon

when music dissipates
when melody and rhythm
blend into silence
our hearts set the tempo
of our passion

and whether the burst of spring
or the quiet of winter
explosion of color
or layers of white
nothing
in all of eternity
can come close to the magic
of when we danced

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MericCotton
36 minutes ago, Parker Owens said:

That’s exquisite. Thank you for sharing this. 

 

Thank you.  I know it moves me - but you never know if something you write will connect to anyone else.  Thank you for letting me know.

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Mikiesboy

mmm  for different reasons this touches me ... i am connected to my Husband just as you describe it ... i often feel i can never be close enough.

 

it's lovely xoxo

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MericCotton
8 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

mmm  for different reasons this touches me ... i am connected to my Husband just as you describe it ... i often feel i can never be close enough.

 

it's lovely xoxo

 

Thanks my friend.  I'm so glad the connection comes through.  Dancing with Mitchel was always special - it's nice someone else understands.

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