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Flash In The Pan - 5. An Uncommon Daisy

Beauty can be found in the simplest of things - like a daisy.

A response to a challenge set by Cia. My nouns were daisy and pencil.

Javid opened the front door cautiously and peered out at the expanse of blueish-white. Looking down, he found a daisy. He stared, shocked, but then he remembered he still had a pencil somewhere. Was there any paper left? A picture, he wanted a picture of this little miracle.

He couldn't remember the last time he'd seen any live flower, never mind a daisy. Since the start of last ice age, however many decades ago, anything green was rare, treasured, almost the stuff of fairytales.

“Jay? Why you letting the bloody cold in? Shut the door, for fuck's sake.”

Javid turned a little at the sound of his father's complaint. “Sorry, Dad. It's just there's a … a daisy outside, as large as life.”

“What?!” Sean rushed to the door and joined him on the threshold. They both gazed in wonderment, as if the daisy was the most beautiful thing on Earth.

Javid sighed. “I wish we could spare the power to take a photo.”

Sean gave him a quick cuddle. “I know, sweetie, but we've barely got enough power credits to get us through to the end of the month. You know how bad it is. Come on, I'm gonna close the door now – we've already lost five percent of our warmth.”

They both knew where that could lead. Javid stood there, right up to the last moment. Then he turned away, his eyes brimming with tears. Sean forced the door shut and checked the seal. Once he was convinced they weren't going to freeze, he turned and looked at Javid.

“Oh, sweetie. Come here.” Sean held his arms out and enveloped Jay in a tight, loving hug. He could feel Javid shaking and sniffling, his tears leaving a damp patch on his thermal coverall.

“It can't be the only daisy left, can it? OK? Think of the equator. Maybe they still have carpets of daisies there. How one got here? Who knows. Maybe it's a sign the temperature's lifting?”

Javid looked at him, hopefully. Sean had an idea. “Hey, I'm sure I saved some flower pictures last summer when we had some power to spare. Shall we have a look?”

He could feel Jay shaking his head against his chest at the suggestion. Then, he started to speak. Sean moved them apart a little so he could hear better.

“Do we have any paper left? Plain paper. I only need a small piece – this size …” Javid used his hands to demonstrate. He was almost pleading.

Sean frowned. Anything that wasn't directly connected to them staying alive, was a luxury. They had precious few of those.

“I don't know, Jay. What d'you want it for anyway?” He thought he already knew the answer.

“I want to draw the daisy. Please … I've got a pencil somewhere. It wouldn't cost us any extra credits … Could I have one last look?”

Reluctantly, Sean opened up again. They both looked down in disbelief. There was no daisy.

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49 minutes ago, Puppilull said:

But there was a daisy and they will have to cling to the hope that there will be one or a whole carpet of them again sometime. Difficult to hold onto something so frail as a flower, but sometimes frail is all you have. 

 

Daisies are so small but also strong, bright, and a bringer of hope, perhaps. Thanks for reading, Puppi!

11 hours ago, comicfan said:

This was an emotional ride. I don't know what was sadder - paper being a rarity, opening the door for a few moments could literally cost you your life, or the fact the daisy vanished. Nicely done.

 

I startled myself with just how much I could manage to pack into 500 words. Sad? Yes, to some degree. Their lives are pared down to what's needed for survival. Thanks for reading!

3 hours ago, droughtquake said:

And now we’re left to ponder whether the daisy was even there to begin with! Cold climates are nightmares for me! (And not just Game of Thrones ‘Winter is Coming’ nightmares!) I have no desire to live where snow is anything but an extreme rarity!  ;-)

Indeed - I think it was. But if so, where did it go? I refer something in the middle, temperature wise.  :) 

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