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What brings us together - Part 1

   (6 reviews)
Genres: Fantasy, Mystery, Romance,

Jordan is a bright young lawyer who being early for his meeting randomly finds a coffee shop. There he meets Cameron and they quickly fall in love. They discover that their meeting is more significant than they suspect.

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Story Recommendations (14 members)

  • Action Packed 1
  • Addictive/Pacing 12
  • Characters 14
  • Chills 2
  • Cliffhanger 2
  • Compelling 12
  • Feel-Good 13
  • Humor 5
  • Smoldering 2
  • Tearjerker 7
  • Unique 7
  • World Building 8


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chris191070

   8 of 8 members found this review helpful 8 / 8 members

This is a wonderful story from @Paladin

We follow Jordan, a bright young lawyer, who finds himself early for a meeting.

He goes to a coffee shop where he meets Cameron.

For both our guys they almost instantly fall in love.

But there is much more to Jordan and Cameron story, you need to read on to discover more about there lives.

Highly recommend and I look forward to part 2.

Response from the author:

Thank you @chris191070 for writing this helpful review.

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empath

   7 of 7 members found this review helpful 7 / 7 members

A beautifully written love story that surprised me with tears and left me wanting more.  Fortunately, this is part 1.  After reading it, I will definitely be reading any and all future parts @Paladin shares.

Response from the author:

Thank you my friend for reading and writing this supportive review

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Daddydavek

   6 of 6 members found this review helpful 6 / 6 members

Part 1 is a well conceived and executed story about love.  It is very fast paced and happens seemingly all at once.  I recommend everyone read this story first before starting on Part 2.

Response from the author:

Thank you @Daddydavek for reading and recommending this story to readers.

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Doha

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

What Brings Us Together Part One, is a love story that made me smile, laugh and cry. Beautifully written, it tells the story of Jordan and Cameron, and a love that blossoms literally overnight. We sense in this pairing something solid, warm and filled with hope. 

i could not put it down. 

Response from the author:

Thank you @Doha for this delightful review. I am so pleased you enjoyed the story.

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Summerabbacat

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

I am not usually a big fan of "love at first sight" (unless it is sung by Kylie) and "everyone get's along smashingly from the word go", but in @Paladin's capable hands I found myself responding far more positively than I would have imagined to love at first sight between Jordan and Cameron. It certainly helped that @Paladin did not dwell on how impossibly good-looking, stylish and well-to-do the newly in love couple were, and there was no mention at all of them having prodigious appendages which brought them earth-shattering, seizure-inducing sex. Thank you for small mercies @Paladin.

Silliness aside, I found the story refreshingly real and the "cast" for the most part very easy going and likeable, although Jordan's mother was a little insufferable at times for me (LOL). The setting was familiar, being entirely on the eastern coast of Australia. 

All in all a thoroughly believable and likeable tale of two men who meet and fall in love, and the journey they begin in life together.

 

Response from the author:

How @Summerabbacat am I expected to respond to this review? :) Fortunately I'm familiar with your entertaining enthusiasm for commenting. Thank you for supporting my writing with this entertaining review.

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