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Demon of fire and other poems of lust, insanity and devotion - 1. In motion

I read about Ottava Rima, and decided to try the form. This is the result to it. Hope you like it!

Something of a hidden passion in your eyes,

Something I cannot fathom and desire.

I can’t but try and wonder if I am wise

when I keep on dreaming of your burning fire.

This feeling creeps within, sinks deep and then dies,

And then it makes me fly ever so higher.

It’s lust, it’s pain, it’s love, and it’s devotion,

It’s all inside of me you’ve set in motion.

Feedback is always welcome!
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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I haven't heard of Ottava Rima before and am excited to see your use of it. Good work!

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2 hours ago, BDANR said:

I haven't heard of Ottava Rima before and am excited to see your use of it. Good work!

 

Thank you very much!

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14 hours ago, AC Benus said:

A good poem to set the tone of the entire collection. I like it :) Someone is a lucky man 

 

Thanks AC :) 

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