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Quirky Poesy - 2. The Love with No Pattern

As by fate,

He

Did create our

We.

Proving all the hate

Unerringly inconsequential.

Justly

Beaten by the flower

Of love eternal

...

hr />For Drew, whose heart beats in the same metre   ;) 
 
Contest!  PM me if you can determine why this is dedicated to Drew.
                The first correct reply will have dinner with
                Ian and Miles in their final Vignette.
Copyright © 2016 skinnydragon; All Rights Reserved.
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Drew Espinosa

Aw!!! :*) That's so sweet of you Skinny! :hug:

 

I figured it out after reading it a few times, but I'm keeping my lips sealed, I want others to figure it out and win that dinner :)

 


This is an amazing poem Skinny :kiss:

Edited by Drew Espinosa
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skinnydragon
On 11/22/2015 09:24 AM, Drew Espinosa said:

Aw!!! :*) That's so sweet of you Skinny! :hug:

 

I figured it out after reading it a few times, but I'm keeping my lips sealed, I want others to figure it out and win that dinner :)

 

 

This is an amazing poem Skinny :kiss:

Thanks Drew!

 

I know it's kinda weird, but I was playing around with stuff and the thought hit me, so I said, "Why not?"

 

It was fun trying, anyway.

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Lisa

I thought this was great! :) I'm not a very deep person, so I had to read the poem a few times for it to finally click! :D

 

Unfortunately, I don't really know Drew, so unless the 'We' in your poem stands for you and Drew, and God (?) stands for 'He', God put you two together, and despite all the haters out there, your love will conquer all! :) Wow, that was one long, run-on sentence. lol

 

Or, maybe 'He' doesn't stand for God, but Drew himself. Maybe Drew played matchmaker, and introduced you to your eternal love. :) Of course I'm probably way off base with both of these! :lol:

 

And now of course I remembered you wanted a PM. Shit.

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Headstall

I'm sure the reason has to do with numbers or a mathmatical pattern. I don't much care why. I LOVE the poem. It's quite stunning in its simplicity. I love the phrasing, formatting, and the message. You have skills, my friend... cheers... Gary...

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skinnydragon
On 11/22/2015 12:49 PM, Mikiesboy said:

Very nice Skinny, I like it. Keep on writing!!

Thanks Tim!

 

Yeah ...I probably will

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skinnydragon
On 11/22/2015 01:58 PM, Lisa said:

I thought this was great! :) I'm not a very deep person, so I had to read the poem a few times for it to finally click! :D

 

Unfortunately, I don't really know Drew, so unless the 'We' in your poem stands for you and Drew, and God (?) stands for 'He', God put you two together, and despite all the haters out there, your love will conquer all! :) Wow, that was one long, run-on sentence. lol

 

Or, maybe 'He' doesn't stand for God, but Drew himself. Maybe Drew played matchmaker, and introduced you to your eternal love. :) Of course I'm probably way off base with both of these! :lol:

 

And now of course I remembered you wanted a PM. Shit.

Haha Lisa lol

 

Don't try to be 'deep' with anything I write ...go for impressions, feelings.

 

Thanks for reading and spending a bit of time. It's appreciated.

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On 11/24/2015 08:42 AM, Headstall said:

I'm sure the reason has to do with numbers or a mathmatical pattern. I don't much care why. I LOVE the poem. It's quite stunning in its simplicity. I love the phrasing, formatting, and the message. You have skills, my friend... cheers... Gary...

Thanks for the kind words Gary!

 

It WAS a little more difficult, trying to get feeling and meaning inside the straight jacket of the pattern. I'm glad you liked the phrasing. That part took the longest to get the message across with all the restrictions.

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AC Benus

I love the image of a divine flower being mightier than all the manifestations of earthly (human) hate. Lovely!!!

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On 03/15/2016 09:35 AM, AC Benus said:

I love the image of a divine flower being mightier than all the manifestations of earthly (human) hate. Lovely!!!

Oh AC!!

 

You reviewed my screwy poem on PI day!

How utterly appropriate!

 

kisses!!

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Emi GS

Fate can buffet you with wonderful thing you can't imagine. Being in Love for eternal was definitely one of them. Such simple words have given so much.

 

Nice Poem SD... :)

 

~Emi.

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skinnydragon
On 03/15/2016 03:29 PM, Emi GS said:

Fate can buffet you with wonderful thing you can't imagine. Being in Love for eternal was definitely one of them. Such simple words have given so much.

 

Nice Poem SD... :)

 

~Emi.

Thank You Emi!

 

A little PI tribute to Drew.

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