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Quirky Poesy - 1. Yeudos

Be there for you,

Always have your back,

Until death do us part.

You complete me,

And provide what I lack,

Betray you never.

Live in my heart!

Love you forever!

Never anyone new!

 

 

 

[Yeudos] (n) lie, falsehood

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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Mikiesboy

Oh yeah.. what happened to, oh, I can't write poetry..
Me thinks you doth protest too much.
Super dude, loved it....
tim

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Headstall

Loved, loved loved the message, and the terrific presentation of it... no wasted words... amazing... cheers, and kudos... Gary...

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skinnydragon
On 11/10/2015 09:01 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Oh yeah.. what happened to, oh, I can't write poetry..

Me thinks you doth protest too much.

Super dude, loved it....

tim

Thanks Tim ...it was your comment that dared me to try

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skinnydragon
On 11/10/2015 09:10 AM, Headstall said:

Loved, loved loved the message, and the terrific presentation of it... no wasted words... amazing... cheers, and kudos... Gary...

Thanks Gary! It means a lot.

Anyway, I probably used my year's allocation of words on "Twoey." I need to be parsimonious!

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skinnydragon
On 11/10/2015 08:56 AM, Drew Espinosa said:

Oh wow! This is amazing! :) Thanks SD for this great poem :hug:

Oh Drew! I'm so happy you found it.

I'm already polishing up the next which is dedicated to YOU. There's also a contest involved, cuz I know you like that sh*t ;)

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skinnydragon
On 11/10/2015 12:24 PM, Defiance19 said:

SkinnyD, writes Poetry?

Amazing expression, simple and sweet! Love it..

Thanks Defiance!

 

Obviously SkinnyD DOESN'T write poetry! But hell, I tried. Maybe I'll try a few more.

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AC Benus

I think the poem is great, but knowing what the title means leaves me feeling a bit queasy. I'm assuming you want readers to feel some of that, but the not knowing if the words were/are spoken in an attempt to fool, or the lying utterances of a loved one, it just all makes me a bit....you know....scared.

 

It's a brilliant poem though, and I'm glad you posted it!

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skinnydragon
On 11/11/2015 09:52 AM, AC Benus said:

I think the poem is great, but knowing what the title means leaves me feeling a bit queasy. I'm assuming you want readers to feel some of that, but the not knowing if the words were/are spoken in an attempt to fool, or the lying utterances of a loved one, it just all makes me a bit....you know....scared.

 

It's a brilliant poem though, and I'm glad you posted it!

Thanks AC!

Well this is certainly not my genre, but your 'queasy' feeling was what I was trying to achieve. (actually I was thinking 'unease.')

So, at least in that respect, it was successful.

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Emi GS

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Not good in poetry!!!??? You have lot of explanation to do big guy... :lol:

 

That was fantastic. Simple, but powerful. Now do I believe in Oaths??? :X Some times Love is not just the truth and you have described it very well. Welcome to the Poetry world... :D

 

~Emi.

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