Lovely! Has a real old world feel about it and the lyrical pattern is very clear and lilting almost. Not quite sure how you gained that quality but I think it's in the rather poetic expressions used. A lovely dreamy feel! And a wonderful waking that is very optimistic of the day. Thanks, Al.

Thank you, Jaro. Later on I will post the two stanzas that go between theses. I got carried away with the challenge and broke my own 'two stanza' limitation  

I like this. Creation of a dreamspace, and a bonus Dickinson: that second dash, which throws about 5 different interpretations into  the last two lines That "that" is going to haunt me all day...

I agree with Jaro. There's a lovely old world feel to these stanzas.