I've read 28 chapters of Dawn of Tears and so far I've loved it as much as I've loved the first Do Over novel.

Although I really would have liked the specifics to be a little more consistent along the storyline, from simple things like calling Dylan's jet first a 797 and then a 787 to more important details along the plot, I really would had a better time reading if the story text was better edited and reviewed.

I wonder if people could help Dan edit these stories and republish them?

There are five chapters left and I'm not sure if I'll like the ending, but at least /so far/ there weren't as many plot holes or flaws with the delivery of the plotline to justify an ending quite yet.

I really hope I enjoy the last few chapters.

As a musical compliment: last time when I read Do Over I said that Inception Soundtrack played over a loop syncs up perfectly...

For Dawn of Tears, although it doesn't sync up perfectly, I've found that the Call of Duty: Modern Warfare 2 soundtrack also does a pretty good job with getting the story synced up sometimes (All 10.7 hours worth of game soundtrack )

Dawn of Tears, by dkstories, may be found here: http://dkstories.gayauthors.org/dawn/