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A Nice Story - Paper Walls

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Billy Martin

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I found a cute story today called "Paper Walls", by KD, a new author here at GA. The story was first post back in early fall, but it just caught my eye today. I read the first 11 posted chapters and I fell in love with it. It centers around a fifteen year old adopted football prodigy from Russia whose adopted dad is a coaching legend of Texas High Football, himself. KD does an awesome job of bringing his characters alive and leaves you wanting more. If fact, the chapters could be longer, but KD doesn't short change you in the content department.

 

I don't do this too often, but I highly recommend this story to all.

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I also agree.  I started reading this story over on Nifty and fell in love with it.  The characters and settings paint a vivid picture of a very talented and lonely 15 year old boy with so much potential.  KD leads us on a path to self awareness and emotional developement, while also showing how lives of others intermingle to develope each other and themselves.

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I also agree.  I started reading this story over on Nifty and fell in love with it.  The characters and settings paint a vivid picture of a very talented and lonely 15 year old boy with so much potential.  KD leads us on a path to self awareness and emotional developement, while also showing how lives of others intermingle to develope each other and themselves.

 

I too found it later on Nifty and still ran into a wall on Christmas. However, KD promises new chapters soon with the help of a new editor. If the new one is the one listed here on GA, he has a good one and the chapters should be even better, I so look forward to them!

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