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August CSR Discussion Day: The Hidden Ones: The Spotlight by Aceinthehole


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Holy mackerel it's Monday, the last Monday of the month! How did that happen already? Well it's a good thing we're ready for it, right? Did you take advantage of the time you had to read Aceinthehole's story, The Hidden Ones: The Spotlight? I know it was really long! Hopefully you made a dent. I will caution you, if you're still mid-read, there are some questions below in the interview that have answers that might be a tad revealing about the story, so I've hidden them with spoilers. Or maybe they will just entice you to read it! Your choice. ;)

 

Do you eat your fruits and vegetables?

I can’t say I always did, but I’ve gotten a lot better about it! I recently graduated college, where I used to only eat frozen pizzas, chicken nuggets, take out and the like. However now that I’m onto the next chapter of my life, I’ve tried my hardest to make a strong commitment to my health, both mental and physical.

If you were writing a book about your life, what would the title be?

The Eighth Circle of Hell: How to Survive in a House with Four Sisters.

I’m just kidding. I love my sisters and the chaos that comes with a packed house. But sometimes, it does feel like the eighth circle of hell!

What don’t we know about you?  

In addition to loving sports and music, I’m a gigantic nerd. I love comic books, video games, T.V. shows and movies. These mediums are really what inspired me to become a writer. I’ve read and watched so many amazing stories, that I hope to one day contribute one of my own!

Is there a literary character (in the whole universe of fiction) that you’ve read who you really identified with?

I’d have to say Tyrion Lannister from A Song of Ice and Fire by George R.R. Martin. I’m nowhere as smart or tactical as he is, but I closely relate to him being an outcast. I’ve always been blessed with family and friends, however I grew up in an area where being gay isn’t widely accepted. His words and wisdom really meant a lot to me, especially when I was coming out to those close to me.

Did something specific in your life/history inspire you to write The Hidden Ones: The Spotlight?

I’d say my experience in High School was what really sparked the idea for this story. I can’t say I was bullied much, but I was also never that popular. Instead I was an anonymous kid who kept to his friends and simply observed everything that was happening around him. Yet what I observed always ate away at me. For no specific reason, certain kids got made fun of for the same qualities the ‘popular’ kids had.

In addition, at every High School I knew, there was always one kid at the top, usually the captain of a sports team or school president. This kid always tried his/her hardest to seem perfect at every turn. Worst of all, they always offered help without ever actually intending to follow through with it. They rarely got their hands dirty in terms of bullying, but turned a blind eye to it. They pretended to be friends with everyone, but in reality they were in it for their own selfish gains.

I guess what I’m trying to say is that the popular kid isn’t all that different from the kid with a target on his back. This hypocrisy was what really inspired The Hidden Ones: The Spotlight. I wanted to show what would happen if that popular kid ever learned just how much they had in common with the bullied kid.

Is there anything you found particularly challenging while writing this series?

The hardest part of writing this story was diving into the character Ryder Sullivan’s mental illness. I think mental illness is often seen as too taboo, especially when talking about young people. Sure, progress is being made, but change is slow and often needs a good push.



The big challenge here was accurately depicting mental illness while also showing the light at the end of the tunnel. For me, it was about showing Ryder at his lowest, while also showing flashes of his potential and possible happiness. He was a character who best exemplifies the saying ‘two steps forward one step back’. Any progress he made seemed to be instantly slowed by the war going on in his head.



Trying to keep all of this in mind, while pushing his character forward was one of the biggest obstacles I’ve faced in writing so far. Yet, it was also the most rewarding.

If you could give advice to yourself when you had first started writing the story, what would it be?

Stop overthinking it, and just keep writing.

There were a lot of moments when I was writing that I just wanted to give up. I often doubted the story, and where it would go. I felt silly trying to create my own rock star, and citing music I’m not sure many people had heard.

But now looking back, those doubts were silly. I was so worried about how it would be received, that I almost lost the story I wanted to tell. It may not be perfect, but I’m proud of it. I got to write about a genre I love, and about an issue that always seemed to bother me.

I credit @JayT, who edited the story, with helping me through my doubts and even brain storming along with me during certain parts. By the end I was able to get to a place where I was really having fun with this story.  

What do you think makes The Spotlight stand out compared to other “similar” stories?

I think what separates it from other stories is how dark and gritty it can get. This is not a light hearted, feel good story. It explores the boxes we force ourselves into, and how much damage that can do to a person. Even when things get better, the damage is already done.

I understand that many people read stories to escape certain realities. After all, I read certain stories for the same reasons. However, we don’t always get the happy endings we dreamed of. Life has a way of warping our endings, and giving us what it feels we need.

I always try to keep this in mind while writing, and to me that whole concept sets this story apart. I wouldn’t say this is a dark story, there are a lot of light and happy moments within it, but I tried my hardest to keep it as realistic as possible.

I believe the journey of Ryder Sullivan and Teddy Haner will take you on a roller coaster of thoughts and emotions. And to me, that’s the beauty of writing.

What do you like best about the story?

This is a very tough question for me, as this story is perhaps the most fun I’ve had writing so far. I got to combine my passion for writing with my passion for music. Often before writing a chapter I would sit down and watch music video after music video to help me get into the right mindset. It was like I got to take messages from the bands I loved and let it flow through me into my own story.

However, after looking at the whole of the story, the thing I like best...

is the character development of Teddy Haner. In my opinion he is very unlikeable at the start. He’s willing to tell anyone anything to get his way. Yet, after forming a friendship with Ryder Sullivan he begins to see life differently. The line between popular and unpopular gets blurred, and the ‘kingdom’ he used to rule crumbles.



Yet, he doesn’t crumble. Sure, he shows moments of weakness, but Teddy Haner rises to the occasion. He shows his inner strength and that he is truly worthy of the titles the school gives to him.

Can you share something about your current work or an upcoming story?

So I have a current story I’m writing along with the editing help of OzLoGo called The Golden City, and two upcoming stories Tales of the Underground Book four: Vision and an unnamed The Hidden Ones third book (although this book is more for fun!). 

The Golden City is very unlike anything I’ve written before. I’m not too sure where it came from. It’s just been this really fun and vibrant story. It’s the journey of Arthur Price following the loss of his single mother and his move to San Francisco. It follows him exploring his new city as he begins to discover his true self. It feels like a lot more of an adventure than anything I’ve written before.

The fourth and final Tales of the Underground story, Vision, will be released after The Golden City is finished. It’ll take place a good twenty to thirty years after the first three books and will focus on Matthew Sanders-Taylor’s journey to find who he really is. This journey will require the help of many characters from this series and in many ways will mirror the first book, Velocity, that sparked my love for writing.

Finally, the third The Hidden Ones which is still unnamed will follow the rising of a new rock star. It was a story I was uncertain about at first, but after receiving requests from some of my readers, is something I will happily begin. It will be a running story I update throughout the year. It’ll help people stay updated on their favorite characters, while also allowing me to continue writing characters I miss! 

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A great interview, but sorry, it was just too long for me to read this month... I'm living in a construction/renovation zone at the moment. It's nice to have stories like this to look forward to, though. :) 

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Great interview. :) I'm sorry I didn't have time to read the story in time for the discussion, but from the answers to the interview questions I'll definitely add it to my list.  

 

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Stop overthinking it, and just keep writing.

I tell myself this all the time. Sometimes it's hard to turn off our own inner voice and let the characters' voices take over.  

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