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Writing Books - Dazzling Dialog



I picked up this book recently in my never ending quest to improve my writing skill set.  It's a short book that is a very quick read.  I'd recommend it as it targets a weakness that a lot of stories have and it gives practical tips on how to spot the problems and how to fix them

Definitely worth the read.  It's available on Kindle as well if you like to keep your library digital.

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