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This story reviewed by @spike382 has piqued my interest. I think I might start reading today. Hoping that this review entices you to read it as well.

 

A New Family Unit
by Ajbt2001

 

Reviewer: spike382
Status: Complete
Word Count: 20,574

 

Here on GA, I am always on the lookout for story content from authors I haven’t read before.  As an aside, I’m personally looking for content outside the paranormal thriller/romance genre that has gained immense popularity on the site in the last couple of years.  So just recently I ran across this story by Ajbt2001, who joined our little community just a few years ago, but already has a number of finished stories published here.  

In a New Family Unit, two single gay fathers with teenage gay sons are living in a duplex together.  Sheer proximity, and attraction binds all of them together.  The two fathers Sam and Taylor quickly begin dating.  Their sons, Cillian and Devon, who also share an attraction,  opt for getting to know each other and becoming friends first.    

Moving from the opening, the story is very much in the title a newly forming family unit of these four living together.  However, it isn’t all sunshine and rainbows.  The story does have its conflicts, with some surprising past connections, and darkness from the past resurfacing in the present. 

I will say, it’s not entirely a perfect story, as a lot it feels like too much too soon.  The two boys, who are 14, often times feel like much younger characters.  Also, each character could use a more distinctive voice and personality. 

That all being said, it’s a fun little tale of romance and the journey of building a new family.  It’s an easy read at only nine chapters, and it’s bound to put a smile on your face.  

Category: Fiction  Genres: Romance  Sub-genres: General Romance  Tags: teen, mature adult, adult. gay, under 18, light-hearted, serious, love  Rating: Mature

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3 hours ago, chris191070 said:

It's a great story from @Ajbt2001 that is well worth a read.

@chris191070 and @BoyLove Thank you for being so supportive and loving, as well as amazing sound boards for me. You guys always help to make my stories better.

I love you both. 

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2 hours ago, Ajbt2001 said:

@chris191070 and @BoyLove Thank you for being so supportive and loving, as well as amazing sound boards for me. You guys always help to make my stories better.

I love you both. 

We love you too! Glad you're getting better. Yes we miss you, but want you to get better more than anything. Glad to see you are back to doing a little writing. Just pace yourself and put the proverbial pen down when you need to.

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3 hours ago, Ajbt2001 said:

@chris191070 and @BoyLove Thank you for being so supportive and loving, as well as amazing sound boards for me. You guys always help to make my stories better.

I love you both. 

Love you too. Take care, get better and write when you feel up to it. All your readers will be here when you post new material.

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