[WrathOfMagneto] Another Lifetime

[PatrickOBrien]

I just posted the first 6 chapters of my current novel in eFiction, titled Another Lifetime. This is the novel I'm trying to write for National Novel Writing Month, but I'm horribly behind schedule, so I don't know if I'll make the deadline.

 

This story is very rough, a definite first draft, lol. What I'm hoping to find out on here is if it's just absolute trash. Please, read the story, and if it is just awful, please tell me.

 

Thanks a ton!

 

^_~

 

(EDIT) Oops, I forgot the link.

 

https://www.gayauthors.org/efiction/viewstory.php?sid=477

 

[PatrickOBrien]

Just added chapter 7. Still looking for feedback.

 

^_~