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We do. But it will be worth the wait.

I suppose for now, we'll just have to delay our gratification. :P

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Awesome chapter. Roller coaster of emotions! I loved the part about Caprican being evil and all... :P

 

I have to agree with Gary about the homage part, though. :)

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I'm late, but caught up!

Well, I am glad you took the time to read it. I have had a lot of fun writing it!

 

First, let me say, Raging tiger? Cool! :2thumbs:

Yes, I first made an evil character based upon my own online persona.

 

 

Laser beams!?!?! EVIL INCARNATE?!?!?

I do believe torturing someone by shooting laser beams at his/body would make the perpetrator evil. Do you disagree?

 

But, ummm, I'm afraid there is a very serious flaw in the plot. Ya see, you have a goat near a CLIFF! Everyone knows that a goat would NEVER have anything to do with a cliff! :P

Yeah, and neither of us would ever kill off a sweet and innocent character either! :lmao:

 

Uhoh... And, um, taking the head of the mutant goat? ACK!

That has not happened. There has been an allusion.

 

 

Hrmmm, So Jan is 250? :lmao:

 

Loved the humor, and the story is very well-written as well! Looking forward to twelve!

 

And, um, the poor goat is innocent after all, right? :unsure:

 

Evoloids live to be around 500. That makes the chracter middle-aged. :)

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I howled with laughter at the taking the head of a mutant goat. I got the joke immediately. I even made a crude/funny comment to Tim about it.

 

I'm glad you read the story CJ. It's certainly one of my favorites. So when does Tim get to be a HA? poke-poke.gif

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I howled with laughter at the taking the head of a mutant goat. I got the joke immediately. I even made a crude/funny comment to Tim about it.

 

I'm glad you read the story CJ. It's certainly one of my favorites. So when does Tim get to be a HA? poke-poke.gif

as soon as he finishes DA trilogy... :unsure:;)

 

*A not so subtle hint to get him to get cracking on his writing*

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as soon as he finishes DA trilogy... :unsure:;)

 

*A not so subtle hint to get him to get cracking on his writing*

Hey, Chapter 12 is almost done. I think there's just a few chapters left in part one after that.

 

I've heard it's gonna end with a really twisted and evil cliffhanger. poke-poke.gif

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I'm the one who suggested a name change for the goat character. Some how Caprican seemed a much better name.

 

Hrmmm, So Jan is 250? lmaosmiley.gif

 

Evoloids live to be around 500. That makes the chracter middle-aged. smile.gif

And I don't look a day over 100. :P

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It was an excellent suggestion Jan. Much better than what he had in mind. I guess we'll be getting a new chapter to do our own thing with fairly soon. I don't know about you but the anticipation has me quite excited.

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as soon as he finishes DA trilogy... :unsure:;)

 

*A not so subtle hint to get him to get cracking on his writing*

It takes time. I am not rushing myself. I have been working on Chapter 12. I will try to finish it soon. ;)

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You can't rush quality. You should know that BK. ;)

It also requires inspiration. These days I am more inspired to fill the roll of reader. I am not just here to be an author. ;)

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It also requires inspiration. These days I am more inspired to fill the roll of reader. I am not just here to be an author. ;)

Fair enough. I know you're not ignoring DE completely. And yes, it's nice to take a break and do some reading. But IMO once you start a story you have an obligation to your readers to complete it. In this case to complete part one of the trilogy. Then you can take a break, do some reading, maybe work on SC a little bit. I'd love to see more of your poetry. And then come back to DE and get several chapters ahead before you start releasing them so you can stay ahead and release on a regular schedule.

 

You're not too wild to be tamed. And I'm the Tiger Tamer. :P

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You can't rush quality. You should know that BK. ;)

of course... i, of all the people, should know that... :P

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of course... i, of all the people, should know that... :P

I know you do. But let's get serious here for a moment. Hopefully without offending or picking on Tim. Do you feel an obligation to your readers to finish one novella before starting another?

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I know you do. But let's get serious here for a moment. Hopefully without offending or picking on Tim. Do you feel an obligation to your readers to finish one novella before starting another?

Indeed I do. That is why my other novella, A Kiss Will Set You Free, is on hold at the moment.

 

Now you'll say that why did I publish the prologue of AKWSYF? Simple...I had the worst case of writers block with AaO and Beast was constantly pestering me to come out with AKWSYF...to pacify him, I had to write it don... :D

 

I like to finish my ongoing works before starting a new one. It helps keep my mind sane, and the plot-lines consistent. Also, the readers of my 'other' story are not left hanging if I pay attention to just one at one time.

 

AKWSYF is an exception, though. A one time exception. :)

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Indeed I do. That is why my other novella, A Kiss Will Set You Free, is on hold at the moment.

 

Now you'll say that why did I publish the prologue of AKWSYF? Simple...I had the worst case of writers block with AaO and Beast was constantly pestering me to come out with AKWSYF...to pacify him, I had to write it don... :D

 

I like to finish my ongoing works before starting a new one. It helps keep my mind sane, and the plot-lines consistent. Also, the readers of my 'other' story are not left hanging if I pay attention to just one at one time.

 

AKWSYF is an exception, though. A one time exception. :)

I paused on Second Chances for that reason. With Dark Earth, I often need to be in a certain mood, especially

when there is an impending fight.

;)

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I paused on Second Chances for that reason. With Dark Earth, I often need to be in a certain mood, especially

when there is an impending fight.

;)

Since you used fight instead of battle I'm guessing this is going to be something more personal. That's the kind of character development I love.

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Since you used fight instead of battle I'm guessing this is going to be something more personal. That's the kind of character development I love.

 

Well, it may be more of a war between two people.

:ph34r:

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And I don't think it's too hard to figure out what two.

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I was trying to be discrete. Yes, I already know that and who the battle will be between. The only thing I don't know yet is how they are going to resolve it.

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I guess you could say we have a mini-cliffhanger here. There are different ways it could end.

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