Christian000 Posted April 7, 2008 Posted April 7, 2008 (edited) The Observer of Time The ground moves as I stand still My eyes gaze with weakness Cars dash past me with great speed The Complex Labyrinth seems to move in circles, somehow endless The same events one after another, Yet every once in a while a new pattern sets and repeats That is the only true way I know I am moving . . . I see without eyes I hear without ears What illusion scorns me when I am alone What am I . . . ? I wish to move with the cars, But my mind searches for the Grand Perspective, to stop and see the Complex Labyrinth Clearly. -written fall of 2005 (high school freshmen poetry) Edited April 7, 2008 by Christian000
AFriendlyFace Posted June 5, 2008 Posted June 5, 2008 I like this, it's a fun and imaginative way to imagine the concept of time. Time itself is such an interesting thing to ponder; surely there cannot be too many poems on the subject! Thanks for adding one more -Kevin
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