jian_sierra Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 As strong emotions grip me I sometimes feel the need To make sense of the senseless By putting thoughts into paper Random things and random feelings Transformed into something tangible Why I feel the need to do this I do not know, nor do I want to know It makes me happy, does anything else matter? The randomness of the written world Which is limited only by my imagination Appeals to my wandering soul But as everything in this life We must sometimes let go of the things we love Things we 1 Link to comment
jian_sierra Posted August 30, 2010 Author Share Posted August 30, 2010 This may be my last poem or at least the last that you'll ever get to read hehe. Thanks for all your support by reading the previous ones I've made. Link to comment
AnytaSunday Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 Reading that last paragraph freaked me out. It sounded like you were giving up on writing there for a moment. Thanks for letting us read your work. 2 Link to comment
jian_sierra Posted August 30, 2010 Author Share Posted August 30, 2010 Reading that last paragraph freaked me out. It sounded like you were giving up on writing there for a moment. Thanks for letting us read your work. Oh no, I won't ever give up on writing hehe. I love it! I can't explain it properly without sounding selfish but I'm having issues regarding sharing (or more appropriately, sharing too much). People are probably tired of me posting here anyways. So any poem I write in the future will be for personal use only Link to comment
Toast Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 Jian, please don't stop posting your poems. I want to read everyone. I really like them. Your poems make me happy too. 1 Link to comment
phana14 Posted September 2, 2010 Share Posted September 2, 2010 What the heck? Jian sierra! You come in here and make a big impression and just--leave? No explanation? I feel like Oliver Twist here! "Please sir, I want some more." One thing I WILL respect though Jian, is that it IS your life AND your choice. Whatever it is that changed your mind--go for it! 1 Link to comment
jian_sierra Posted September 3, 2010 Author Share Posted September 3, 2010 What the heck? Jian sierra! You come in here and make a big impression and just--leave? No explanation? I feel like Oliver Twist here! "Please sir, I want some more." One thing I WILL respect though Jian, is that it IS your life AND your choice. Whatever it is that changed your mind--go for it! Sorry If it's any consolation, I'm going to write one today. And only because someone bullied me into it As for the explanation, well it's complicated. But everything is fine now hehe. I think. Sorry again... Link to comment
phana14 Posted September 10, 2010 Share Posted September 10, 2010 Jian, I just realized that I didn't tell you what I thought of "Randomness" itself. DUH!:wacko: Well now. Even a *swan song* from your pen comes off so clearly and beautifully written that it HAS to be shared. See there! And you! Ready to escape--run away. Bad boy! Bad, bad boy!" "Randomness" deserves-- !! Link to comment
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