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Tipping The Hourglass by NightOwl

 

We all have regrets in our pasts, we've all made mistakes. Sometimes they haunt us. What if we were truly able to change those mistakes?

 

:nuke: :nuke: Spoilers Below!!! :nuke: :nuke:

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This was a hard read, in that the topic is extremely serious and emotional. Your writing, of course, is brilliant and story telling superb, so I managed to finish it. That's saying something, because usually I will drop a book if it involves child sexual abuse.

 

I'm really glad I did continue, too, because I just loved the twist and ending.

 

Thank you for writing and sharing your work.

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Gah...I'm surprised I read all that. Whenever I see the scrollbar rapidly shrink to nothingness, I get scared off. However, I braved the storm and pushed on through, reading this all in its entirety (mostly because you wrote it :) ). I'm glad I did. It was excellent and I kept wanting to read on, anxious to know what will happen next. The ending was a good twist as well. I kept wondering what the frak the title had to do with anything, and I was answered. Great job!

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A beautiful story, a chance to fix so many regrets. Thank you.

Hey Riblur, I am glad that you liked the story, I thought it was some of my best work.

 

This was a hard read, in that the topic is extremely serious and emotional. Your writing, of course, is brilliant and story telling superb, so I managed to finish it. That's saying something, because usually I will drop a book if it involves child sexual abuse.

 

I'm really glad I did continue, too, because I just loved the twist and ending.

 

Thank you for writing and sharing your work.

Hey Anyta,

I am very glad that you powered through and finished the story. I know where you are coming from and I do much the same thing. It depends ont he context and the way it is written. If it is written in something close tothe way i wrote it I can find it acceptable but I have read work where it was not only condoned but was graphicly detailed.

 

I am glad that you enjoy my work and this story in particular. The twist at the end was my favorite part, one that i agonized over because there were two scenes competing for it lol.

 

Best,

NightOwl

 

Gah...I'm surprised I read all that. Whenever I see the scrollbar rapidly shrink to nothingness, I get scared off. However, I braved the storm and pushed on through, reading this all in its entirety (mostly because you wrote it :) ). I'm glad I did. It was excellent and I kept wanting to read on, anxious to know what will happen next. The ending was a good twist as well. I kept wondering what the frak the title had to do with anything, and I was answered. Great job!

 

Hey Sage, I am glad you stopped in.

 

I am glad you braved the length and read the story through. It's a real ego boost to know you read it because it was mine lol. I am glad that I got you hooked and kept you going. lol you're reaction to the title is just what I was going for, I wanted folks to wonder about it.

 

Glad you liked.

 

best,

NightOwl

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Shit hun, you just get better and better and that twist was SO not seen coming. I LOVE your writing and this just reminds me why. a FANTASTIC story in every way

 

 

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Hey Night Owl,

 

A good read. I was scared for Parker, I am glad he had a guardian angel. Thank you. The writing was excellent.

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O wow? That's was so good?

 

I love it! I mean, at some point of the story I was really surprised that you only used haunting as part of the story, and then I think that is a very clever move too.

 

I don't know what I'm saying, but I love it, so...

 

 

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Sorry it has taken so long to get back to you guys, I've ben distracted and busy recently. First I want to thank yall for dropping in and letting me know your thoughts.

Shit hun, you just get better and better and that twist was SO not seen coming. I LOVE your writing and this just reminds me why. a FANTASTIC story in every way

 

 

Always a pleasure to see you Nephy,

 

I am glad that you like the story, especially the twist at the end lol. I am glad you are a fan of my work, it means a lot to me.

 

Hey Night Owl,

 

A good read. I was scared for Parker, I am glad he had a guardian angel. Thank you. The writing was excellent.

Hey Bugeye, it's been awhile since I saw you.

 

I am glad you liked the story, I wanted folks to scared for Parker, to feel his fear. Guardian Angel, I like that. I am glad you liked the story.

 

O wow? That's was so good?

 

I love it! I mean, at some point of the story I was really surprised that you only used haunting as part of the story, and then I think that is a very clever move too.

 

I don't know what I'm saying, but I love it, so...

 

 

 

 

Hey Kevin, good to see you.

 

I am glad you loved the story, it means a lot to me to hear that. I really agonized over if this story fit the description for haunting or not with the way I wrote it. I am glad that it seems to fit.

 

 

Thanks again to all of you.

 

best,

NightOwl

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