Site Administrator Graeme Posted December 12, 2010 Site Administrator Posted December 12, 2010 Possession by Altimexis Bret and Pete decide to explore the site where the football team captain’s body was found earlier that winter, but then Pete starts to act very strangely. :nuke: :nuke: Spoilers Below!!! :nuke: :nuke:
Kev de Cauchery Posted December 19, 2010 Posted December 19, 2010 That is one haunted story! Intereting, and definitely haunted. Nay for the non-happy ending, but yay for the fab writing!
Stargazer Posted December 19, 2010 Posted December 19, 2010 Wow, that really was a creepy ending! I wasn't sure if Pete had killed Jeff out of some kind of jealousy or if Bret had killed Jeff after they had sex ... and I'm thinking the implication is there. It's like he's possessed by something else. So I'm thinking Bret killed them both. Totally not what I had expected. Nice job!
Toast Posted December 20, 2010 Posted December 20, 2010 Enjoyed the short story, because it is a big mystery. We have love twice and destruction twice and we have no answers. I kind of like that. Thank you.
Johnathan Colourfield Posted December 27, 2010 Posted December 27, 2010 My goodness What an excellent story Lots of twists i may have to read more of your stuff
C James Posted January 4, 2011 Posted January 4, 2011 Definitely some unexpected twists there! Every time I thought I knew where it was going, it changed. Well done!
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