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Title: If No One Notices Reviewer: Nephylim

 

sadist Talk switching emotions on and off, tension rising and falling,

playing with emotions. Fabulous.

Date: 09/23/2009 03:42 PM

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Title: If No One Notices Reviewer: Jaydee

I loved the novelty of it!The story hits a little... a lot... close

to home for me. It reeks of my feelings and...... well.... i loved it.

Date: 06/01/2009 02:21 AM

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Title: If No One Notices Reviewer: PicklePip86

 

If your story makes people think i think you've done your job as an

author. And a good job at that. Personally, though it cut a little

to close to home for me...

Date: 01/12/2009 05:19 AM

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Title: If No One Notices Reviewer: rbq4u

it was nice, a little odd, but it was nice - um i think that it could be

continued, because it does't seem complete... at all! oh well.Author's

Response: Thanks, odd in what way? I was going for a bit off-beat, but I hope it

was believable. I kinda wanted to leave it open-ended. I'm glad you felt like it

was interesting enough to continue though!

Date: 08/18/2008 07:54 PM

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Title: If No One Notices Reviewer: Windkaizer

I'm not sure if I should be surprised or depressed. This is an extremely

good story, just like your others, and I like the mystery at the end. Did James

commit suicide or not, I believe that will be the question on everyone's mind.

Extremely good work, and I hope that I can someday get to your level of writing

skill.Author's Response: Hey Wind! Thank you very much for the review!

You also commented on one of the central things I was going for with the story:

the uncertainty of James' end decision and action. Thanks! It was great to read

your review. I'm also extremely flattered by your remark about my writing,

thanks!

Date: 07/06/2008 10:24 AM

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