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Title: The Long Goodnight Reviewer: Jaydee

you have a knack for novelty.... this type of scenario is common, yet you

really let the emotions out rawly and approached both characters with

conviction. nice short

Date: 06/01/2009 02:35 AM

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Title: The Long Goodnight Reviewer: Conner365

 

This is a beautiful story. certainly one of the best of the many short

stories i have read.

To me, it says so much about the ideals of human nature that many of us try

to seek, and mostly fail to find.

Ed

 

Date: 11/18/2008 12:45 PM

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Title: The Long Goodnight Reviewer: rbq4u

 

oh my god. that was really good.

if i had writtan it i would have made them get together, but when u didn't,

that's really what made it good. all in all it was a happy ending - sorta

but VERY cute. loved it. that's probably how i feel with a lot of my...male

friends (you know how bobby is...yeah that)Author's Response: Awww

thanks rbq! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and I really appreciate your

comments! I was going for a realistic, but sweet ending. Glad it worked

:-)

Date: 08/18/2008 07:41 PM

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Title: The Long Goodnight Reviewer: steph291

I'm sensing a bittersweet pattern here... =pI can tell that this is

one of your older works; the dialogue doesn't have the same punch as you're

newer stuff.Author's Response: *gasp* Me, bittersweet? Nevah! :-P

Date: 08/10/2008 04:49 PM

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