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Title: Reflections Over Coffee Part II: Prologue

Reviewer: kasjo_peja

 

I liked Ben. I really preferred him to Mike, so now I'm really disappointed

and feel lead on. It seems like the series sets up a very long and complicated

road which will bring Aaron and Mike together. Because right now, with all this

'my friends hate your friends', Ben-Aaron relationship is doomed to

failure.

Date: 08/30/2010 09:26 AM

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Title: Reflections Over Coffee Part II: Prologue

Reviewer: taina1959

 

Oh Kevin!!!! Knock Knock!! Where are you dear??? I need more!! You're killing

me with the suspence! Feed my addiction sweetheart!! hehehe!! You are such a

tallented writer, I've enjoyed everything you've written so far. You make your

stories so much fun to read! They are definitely a good "Fix" when one is

depressed and need a good laugh!

Love and Light ~~ Rush

Date: 02/01/2009 03:16 PM

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Title: Chapter 2: A Cosmo Mixer

Reviewer: juliandarling

I really like this story so far, please continue it! I'm practically in

love with all the characters, although Matt is giving me a bit of a headache!

What a queen. And I really really like Aaron, although he's a bit of an idiot,

especially about what happened at the party, what with Dave's HIV status.

Date: 09/11/2008 11:26 PM

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Title: Reflections Over Coffee Part II: Prologue

Reviewer: tomon

 

 

This chapter is so well written, I do wonder if this is actually just real

life and you write it out as "aaron".All the characters are so well

described, they seem human.Loved BMAD and this is ace too.Can't decide

who i dislike the most, daisy or giorgio.Would LOVE a bitchfight between

ronnie and daisy.

Date: 09/06/2008 08:15 PM

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Title: Chapter 2: A Cosmo Mixer

Reviewer: rbq4u

weird, update soon!

Date: 09/04/2008 09:51 PM

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Title: Chapter 2: A Cosmo Mixer

Reviewer: emerald

 

intense O.O

this is a great continuation and WOW THIS CHAPTER IS REALLY COOL it

really gives the reader a better look at all the characters. poor juan

though. and..

thank you so much for using correct spanish (or you know, getting

someone else to do it) that part was great.

cant wait for next chapter

Date: 08/31/2008 12:01 AM

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Title: Chapter 2: A Cosmo Mixer

Reviewer: steph291

wow. nice strong finish!

Date: 08/30/2008 01:01 PM

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Title: Chapter 2: A Cosmo Mixer

Reviewer: Dion

 

I find myself wondering when Aaron will get a clue and realize all the

aggravation he's going through isn't worth it.

Looking forward to your next chapter, Kevin.

Date: 08/28/2008 12:08 PM

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Title: Chapter 2: A Cosmo Mixer

Reviewer: excuse

Ok... I only reviewed last night... but this chapter was THAT good... that

well it deserves another :PI was inanely smiling to myself the whole way

through this chapter... thankfully i was alone... otherwise I would have just

looked weird.Anyway off topic, fantastic chapter, totally loved the fight

scene, i really feel for Cosmo, like i totally just want to hug him, but at the

same time slap some sense into him, Giorgio on the other hand... well... I

don't know... I dislike him for the way he is with Ben and Aar, but I kind of

warmed a lil to him because of the fight scene... I agree that he should

probably just mind his own business... but he's totally just looking out for

Cosmo... even though what was said needed to be said... just maybe not infront

of everyone... oh and can Daisy maybe... just maybe... end up being out bitched

by someone? i'd love him to be taken down a peg... or 20 (oops at the size

of this thing...) Best wishes, Mike

Date: 08/28/2008 11:31 AM

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Title: Chapter 2: A Cosmo Mixer

Reviewer: Windkaizer

I'm sitting here, just in awe of this chapter. Laughing my ass off through

most of it, but still in awe.First, the burning thing at the begining of

this chapter. The way you kept it up is priceless. And the butt-plug coment

seriously had me laughin for awhile.Then, this took such a sharp turn that

it caught me off gaurd. The serious turn of events was extremely well done. And

the fight scene, very emotional.As for Giorgio, still don't like him. Just

like Aaron, I don't like him. He needs to stay out of his friends life and let

them deal with their own problems. WORRY ABOUT YOURSELF MY FRIEND!

Literally.Keep up the great work.

Date: 08/28/2008 10:35 AM

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Title: Chapter 1: Something to do on a Quiet

Saturday Reviewer: excuse

Brilliant, if not very steamy :PI love your writing style, its so fluid

and erm... *thinks of word* chatty? comfortable? laid back?ok those words

all suck but thats what I'm getting at, well done on another great

chapter!Author's Response: Thank you very much! :-D I was definitely

trying to make it steamy :-P As for the chatty style, yep, it's supposed to be

almost as though it's coming directly out of Aaron's head in an inner-monologue

sort of way. Thanks so much for the review and comments! I really appreciate it!

 

Date: 08/27/2008 09:40 PM

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Title: Chapter 1: Something to do on a Quiet

Saturday Reviewer: Windkaizer

So glad to see this story up and around. Happinness abounds through

me.Now, onto the story. Aaron, once again is extremely funny. Whole scene

with the dildoe, priceless. 'I know where that goes...', seriously, laughing for

about ten minutes.But, I get the feeling that he's handling C4 and it's

going to explode whether he wants it to or not (he shouldn't though. Most people

don't like explosives in the face). His whole relationship seems almost too

perfect, and that usually ends up in total devistation.Because, here's what

I think, if something bad does actually happen to the rela, he's so far into

that false sense of security that he probably won't be able to bounce back into

that forever shattered fantasy world of his without stepping on a lot of broken

shards.All in all, I think the relationship is going to fail in a gala of

fire and pretty colors.With Mick, however, I don't believe that will happen.

So, uh...hintity hint hint.Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for the

thoughtful review, Wind! I'm so glad you got a kick out of this chapter :-)

Well, I won't say what I have planned or give spoilers of course, but I will say

that relationships are usually messy, and that neither Ben nor Mick is going

anywhere anytime soon

Date: 08/23/2008 02:42 AM

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Title: Chapter 1: Something to do on a Quiet

Saturday Reviewer: steph291

I loved this chapter, Kevin! =)Author's Response: Thanks Steph!

:-D

Date: 08/22/2008 09:45 PM

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Title: Reflections Over Coffee Part II: Prologue

Reviewer: steph291

Nice, Kevin. I liked this one much better than the last coffee.

=)Author's Response: Thanks Steph! I was hoping this coffee would be

a bit more popular than the last one.

Date: 08/21/2008 11:34 PM

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Title: Chapter 1: Something to do on a Quiet

Saturday Reviewer: rbq4u

nice start. cant wait for the updateAuthor's Response: Thanks!

:-D

Date: 08/21/2008 05:15 PM

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Title: Chapter 1: Something to do on a Quiet

Saturday Reviewer: Madrigal

O_O So, I pretty much loved this chapter. I completely forgot about Mick

when I reached the sex scene xD.Author's Response: Thanks Maddy! :-D

LOL, I hope Aaron did too

Date: 08/21/2008 03:27 PM

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Title: Chapter 1: Something to do on a Quiet

Saturday Reviewer: Dion

 

Eight paragraphs up, the word is 'massaging'.

Definitely hot, Kevin. Wow.Author's Response: My goodness! What

an embarrassing mistake! Thanks for letting me know, Dion! :-D And thanks very

much for the review!

Date: 08/21/2008 04:06 AM

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Title: Reflections Over Coffee Part II: Prologue

Reviewer: Dion

 

 

Whew! Aaron's mind is something akin to being in a dinghy during hurricane

season! I think my brain hurts.

One peeve: "Most of the time when Cosmo is around I don’t even threatened by

Giorgio at all." This sentence is missing a word. My guess is 'feel'.

Another great start, Kevin. I'm glad to see your writing

again!Author's Response: LOL, yep Aaron's a bit all over the place

for sure! Thanks so much for giving me a heads up about the missing 'feel'! I've

fixed it now :-D

Date: 08/21/2008 03:54 AM

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