[Dezlboi] Efiction Reviews for Exertion

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Title: The Poem Reviewer: Beautiful SeDUCTION

LOL i knew it was something non erotic in a way but dammit if it didn't

make me wonder hehe. Fool me four times shame on me. Good one

Date: 12/26/2007 06:03 PM Title: The Poem Reviewer:

Doveglion

 

 

this is so beautiful...thank you for posting it here

Date: 03/02/2007 06:36 PM Title: The Poem Reviewer:

Sterling WOW. How cool is this!!! You're a magician with words,

Dez. My favorite? "lovelustlonging" Your imagry is is not

forced and works totally, in whatever context your reader choses.Very nicely

done...--SterlingDate: 09/15/2006 02:56 PM

Title: The Poem Reviewer: AFriendlyFace Dude!! That was

amazing! Gosh if that's how you talk about your bicylce and I'd sure like

to see how you talk about....hehe, Great job!! Date:

09/03/2006 05:34 AM

 

 

 

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The Poem Reviewer:

Whatsifsowhatsit2 Lol! This poem was just too funny =) afterwards,

that is =)I'm gonna send it to Remy okay? =PAlmost a shame to put that

'plot' at the ending though... that made it funny, the rest was just kinda...

you know pretty, beautiful =)Oh and I just don't understand that one line

... "Is ejaculation possible if we are one, with no beginning and no end to you

and me?"How does that relate to the... you know... 'plot'? =P((still

giggling)) Date: 08/24/2006 07:22 PM Title: The Poem Reviewer:

Luc That is one awesome poem! "Is ejaculation possible if

we are one, with no beginning and no end to you and me?" That was

wonderful. Beautiful.Date: 08/02/2006 10:33

PM Title: The Poem Reviewer: Formosa Wow, powerful words and emotons.

Certainly exerted yourself there... I guess you like riding bikes : P

Date: 07/26/2006 08:23 AM Title: The Poem Reviewer:

sparrow

 

 

Absolutely stunning poem. Especially the last two lines. Thanks for

sharing.

Date: 07/26/2006 12:48 AM Title: The Poem Reviewer:

Silven There are no words in any language to describe how your poem

made me feel. Please keep on posting your poetryDate:

07/25/2006 11:37 PM Title: The Poem

Reviewer: Boy In Doubt Such a sweet

poem. :)Date: 07/25/2006 08:50 PM