[Nephylim] Efan's Poem

[Nephylim]

Check out the poem written by my son, Efan.

 

I think it's awesome considering he's only 10

 

reviews and comments compulsory, especially from mothers

[Johnathan Colourfield]

i added a review but i'd just like to say that to be constructing something creative in terms of poetry is very good at his age

 

I just wonder if he'll be writing like his mum in a few years time...

[Nephylim]

Thanks hun. I was very very proud of him.

[phana14]

Thanks hun. I was very very proud of him.

 

Goodness! You guys have been so busy all over the doggone place!

 

I have read Efan's poem, Nephy.

 

What comes to my mind (and did a while ago when I read it) is that Ef is indeed a chip off the old block! (that's for him, not you).

 

I drew an analogy from the first two lines: "As bright as day"-of course that would HAVE to be Efan. And then line two: "As dark as night". I wonder...

 

There is an element of maturity here that seems rather unusual for a person of this age. However! Since this person has been exposed to the intellect of such as you-meh-leaves me wondering.

 

Give the 'lil' dude a hug. He earned it with "Death and Life Dark and Light".

 

Hugs!

[Nephylim]

Thank you. He is definitely the light one