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note of a dead man

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ashes of June ...
your eye are delighted for me firing my soul draining my mind....
when i see you....
my thoughts get drained....
my tears are gone ....
my heart stops .
 i know i wont be able to be with u any more
loving you is the only thing i can do for you .....
ashes of the June 
my heart is beating for you 
from deep inside...
i collapse ....
i ruined....
i my self got a sin of being a boy ...
god??? if u exist then answer me why ain't i a person that i want to be?:((
i wish
I lOVE yOU like now i'm dead man ...

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Another emotive poem from you. The beauty of poetry is the writer's freedom to express feelings - anger, love, hatred, depression. I think you've covered them all here.

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@MacGreg Thank you for your kindness and also thanks for admiring my writings and by the way beside my terrible conditions in my life every thing i write is about my self i felt every single word in my life :sadness ,depression,love,... although i feel love just in one direction and didn't catch response of it. i will write more .after all thank you again Mr. MacGreg:))

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