nicks_a_writer Posted July 31, 2006 Posted July 31, 2006 So guys.... i know that this topic will get like one or two post tops but those one or two posts will help me with my writing... so here it goes... what did you all think about my story... was it to sappy and corny... was it at all believeable... i have no self esteem for my writing... so please tell me if i am just wasting my time... also feel free to tell if you liked it and what you liked about... and just so you know that was my first time writing a sex scence... Anyway if you have read it yet here is the link to it... https://www.gayauthors.org/anthology/summer...cksawriter.html so anyway... go read it and tell me what you think... good or bad... later ~ nick
NickolasJames8 Posted July 31, 2006 Posted July 31, 2006 So guys.... i know that this topic will get like one or two post tops but those one or two posts will help me with my writing... so here it goes... what did you all think about my story... was it to sappy and corny... was it at all believeable... i have no self esteem for my writing... so please tell me if i am just wasting my time... also feel free to tell if you liked it and what you liked about... and just so you know that was my first time writing a sex scence... Anyway if you have read it yet here is the link to it... https://www.gayauthors.org/anthology/summer...cksawriter.html so anyway... go read it and tell me what you think... good or bad... later ~ nick Dude, you're totally not wasting your time....just keep writing for us and we'll keep reading
C James Posted July 31, 2006 Posted July 31, 2006 So guys.... i know that this topic will get like one or two post tops but those one or two posts will help me with my writing... so here it goes... what did you all think about my story... was it to sappy and corny... was it at all believeable... i have no self esteem for my writing... so please tell me if i am just wasting my time... also feel free to tell if you liked it and what you liked about... and just so you know that was my first time writing a sex scence... Anyway if you have read it yet here is the link to it... https://www.gayauthors.org/anthology/summer...cksawriter.html so anyway... go read it and tell me what you think... good or bad... later ~ nick I thought it was really good! Please keep writing! BTW, have you seen the other thread for your story? FriendlyFace made on for you in the cafe, and it has detialed comments there, including my own. https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/index.php?showtopic=5129
nicks_a_writer Posted August 1, 2006 Author Posted August 1, 2006 I thought it was really good! Please keep writing! BTW, have you seen the other thread for your story? FriendlyFace made on for you in the cafe, and it has detialed comments there, including my own. https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/index.php?showtopic=5129 OMG I DIDNT KNOW THIS!!! i am glad that you pointed it out to me or i would have never found it... lol! later ~ nick
C James Posted August 1, 2006 Posted August 1, 2006 OMG I DIDNT KNOW THIS!!! i am glad that you pointed it out to me or i would have never found it... lol! later ~ nick Glad I could help, and glad you will keep writing!
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