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    Threesome

    JJ has a long way to go. The meds are suppressing the real gremlins. Will is right to be doubtful.
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    Toxic Condo

    You have to hit the bottom before you can climb back up. This might be the turning point.
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    L & O Chapter 3

    " I realized that I had just walked into the middle of a robbery, and I quickly turned around and dashed outside, just as a shotgun fired in my direction, which hit my arm, as I struggled to stay upright, and I ran straight into the grip of a mean looking man, who grabbed me, just as I heard noises behind" "I guessed that we were only a short distance away from the USA border, which made me very nervous, not only because I had heard so many stories about the out-of-control gun laws there, " The robbery with the shotgun occurred in Canada, right?
  4. Imagine he's riding around heaven on a Harley .......
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    Moving In

    Jeremy's behavior is only as good as the pills he takes.
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    "An Odd Job"

    Well, you have my attention. Waiting to be impressed.
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    Fuego

    I'm still not trusting JJ. Once the pills wear off, he is still the little bitch.
  8. I don't trust JJ (or Jeremy). In the month since his release from the hospital, he has made no effort.
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    Spring Ch 14

    Why are there no video cameras to catch "K"?
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    Choices

    Chief Monroe is my number one suspect.
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    Fab

    It seems Fab might be a lost family member in some way. A French connection?
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    Poster

    I suspect Poster will not go quietly. I bet he will continue to be a character Will has to deal with.
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    Reconnection

    Enough about JJ.
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    Pregnancy

    I will not call JJ by that silly name. Karma will come down hard on JJ.
  15. Well, JJ did mention inbreeding.
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    Take Me Chapter 1

    quokka wrote this story? No doubt.
  17. JJ crossed the line. I would not want an angry Will staring me down.
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    New Career

    " Professional Psychologist " I'm at a loss for words.
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    Road Trip Home

    Julia is off somewhere having Oscars' child. She is skilled in seduction and is going to cause financial ruin to the clueless Oscar.
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    Phone Call

    I skipped reading this story for many chapters, came back to check, and found nothing had changed. Oscar still has the same extreme reactions and yet we have no good medical explanations. Give us some clues, please.
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    Phone Call

    I doubt Oscar feels any remorse for Rizen's condition; he seems to be entirely self-centered.
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    Adventure Park

    Does Oscar have a hidden brain tumor? Extreme reactions continue far too long.
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    The Summons

    What a great start for the New Year. Always suspicious when someone suddenly tries to be nicer than expected.
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    Chapter 101

    Not a surprise that that he is dead. Who did it and why did it take so long? It's a long list of suspects.
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    Chapter 98

    I have to read this again and make some kind of chart to diagram the characters and their relationships. "Twisted" is not a strong enough word.
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