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A dinner party that requires metal detectors.........can't imagine anything could go wrong.
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Storm clouds are brewing. Who is the father?
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I'm second! I'm second! I was not expecting this tonight. I am glad I checked for the update.
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“Maybe you’re not,” How long do we wait for this bomb to hit?
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Every diver's secret dream...finding a sunken treasure ship filled with gold.
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Waiting for some action. Maybe Jay gets punched in the nose and stuffed in a suitcase........
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This is so much about JP and about Will.
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Okay with all the sweetness and cute stuff. Feels like we are being setup for more drama to come.
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Afraid of what Zach may do. If the eye problem puts him out of football, he will be dangerous. Drama is coming.
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Having a fractured orbital socket could seriously impact Zach's football career if there is permanent sight damage.
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The cook is Russian? Is this a clue?
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Could the flying soda can damage Zach's eye so badly that he can no longer play football?
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Devlin will run again. This time even farther away.
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Help me understand. He runs away from friends that want to be kind to him and yet he stays at a place where someone wants to hurt him?
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What's wrong with this guy? He abandoned his friends who were so kind to him. Good luck out in the real world.
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Clarence Thomas might want to study the old case of Loving v. Virginia before he steps out too far.
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Oops! Maybe this is part of another story?
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One of the most interesting stories I have read. Waiting for more.
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Not really a cliff hanger. We have all waited for this chapter and sorta knew it was coming to this. Dear author is not going to kill of one of our favorite characters?
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“Unless something happens" Not exactly a subtle cliff hanger.
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While we are riding unicorns thru fields of clover under a rainbow I predict something bad will happen soon.
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Chapters get longer if you repeat them three times? Oops!
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Alabama native resents such a comment. Author can do better.
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Something big is going to happen soon. Like that change in the air before a thunderstorm.
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This seems so easy and too smooth. I foresee some trouble brewing. Our esteemed author is setting us up.
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