davewri
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I really have enjoyed this story but it seems to go on forever. Thank you for all the effort you have made to give us this story.
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Is there an ending coming any time in this long saga? A long chapter once a week rather than drip, drip, drip?
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He might not know his real name in any case. Imagine his father used a lot of aliases when on the move.
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he should have taken a moment to see what the status of his father's investigation Police can now check who researches online certain crime stories like arson and murder. Why would someone in another state lookup an unsolved case? Videos of onlookers are taken at crime scenes and fed thru facial recognition software. Big brother is getting more tech savvy.
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I'm going to stop here. This is going to get ugly and I don't need to subject myself to this. Maybe look for more "happy" stories...............
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A lot of missing back story. A lot of mayhem like this must have really strong reasons. Arson, battery, killing livestock, and attempted murder must be something big.
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I suspect some of the trustees are somehow involved with the dirty deal. Always follow the money trail.
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Perhaps his phone was off.
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Hope all those cameras got good photo evidence.
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Girls like Marcy do not go away quietly. She could be trouble.
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I first read this story years ago. Reading it again is like a time machine with flashes of memory.
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We seem to be a long way from "happily ever after". Waiting for book number four.
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Another story without chickens and roosters. What in the world is coming next ?
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Want to bet the Child Services lady is envolved in the scam?
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There still seems to confusion about chickens and roosters. Chickens lay eggs without help from roosters. There will soon be baby chicks after the rooster does his part.
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Knowing our great author, Jim will handle any legal problems, otherwise we wouldn't have a story
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My simple answer was to the statement Although without a rooster, I doubted we’d get any. My grandmother got her young chicks at the feed store and preferred not to have a noisy rooster.
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Hens don't need a rooster in order to lay eggs. Without a rooster, the eggs are infertile, so won't develop into young chicks.
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This is going to be a good story.
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Tonto is back in the story. Will is growing up. Great story.
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Darkness before the light.
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Did we miss the part where all the gold was found in the trunk?
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The wonderful thing about writing fiction is that you can create your own world. The idea of cross pollinating plants is very mild in the scheme of creative writing.
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I have always thought this series was about Will. He is growing up surrounded by rich and powerful people so it is no surprise he is such a "take charge" kind of person. He has learned from the masters and will only become stronger.
