davewri
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This story is making me dizzy. Hard to keep up with this wacky tale. I love it.
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These are some really dumb people. Cell phone records are just as valuable as DNA.
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A gated community with a guard at the entrance....video cameras...do these kids watch CSI?
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I am always looking for clues and cookie crumb trails. What about Alexander's sudden illness and that earlier business discussion with Richard?
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What does a "cabin boy" do?
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“Have a seat TJ, we need to talk.” Uncle Brayden said Hope this is the part where we all get some clarity to this somewhat jumbled up story.
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I read this twice and I still don't understand all of it. As an author it must make sense to you because you know what you are trying to convey. As a poor feeble minded reader I just wait for another chapter that might clarify the story line. Did I miss a chapter?
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Very sure there will be trouble.
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Something romantic must have been going on behind the scenes.
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....never piss off a Marine.
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But not admitting he actually ever had sex with anyone.
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Jexon is somewhat rudely insisting again he be addressed as "Doctor".
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Good to see he decided to keep the airbase.
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200 thread count sheets? Think that is really in the sandpaper range.
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DA Ch 34 - Back to Civilisation
davewri commented on quokka's story chapter in DA Ch 34 - Back to Civilisation
It's about time for some real drama here. Maybe the lowly private gets a promotion. -
Cogito Ergo Sum
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My nephew is a crewmember on a C17 Globemaster. It is definitely a huge airplane.
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About JJ.........I had a close friend in college who was so concerned with her appearance that she tried everything. It became a serious medical issue. There are a lot of real life JJ's .
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In chapter 12 Gramps said "Now I have a policy, and you can check with personnel if you don't believe me, any time an employee makes a suggestion that results in lower costs, we give them a bonus. So you can expect a nice bonus on this suggestion
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I thought there was a lot of reward money coming for discovering the fraud on the invoices.
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Thankfully this is not the real world. It's the world the author made for us. A little diversion for this pandemic nightmare.
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"and don’t worry, all will be fine" somehow I don't think that will be the case. this story needs some drama.
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Marcus must be more than just a casual friend
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Love a happy ending!
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This is very much a mystery. Mark is not what he seems. "If it's too good to be true" .....
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