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Frog is overwhelmed... hope that Dingo can give him some perspective.
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Another exciting chapter. I am pleased to see Coach have an honest discussion with young Jody and not slut shame him.
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Looking forward to more of Torryn's backstory to fill in the gaps!
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Charlie & his Aunt Daphne
andy cannon commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Charlie & his Aunt Daphne
The scene in the restaurant was insane! -
Antipathy and Invisible Battles
andy cannon commented on Invnarcel's story chapter in Antipathy and Invisible Battles
It seems as though Oric needs to talk about his situation, but he shuts out the one person willing to listen to him. -
Great chapter!
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That's the way to end a chapter!
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Very compelling story telling!
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Claus and his kinky Santa are doing their best to make the Yuletide festive.
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Chapter 6 - Who Am I?
andy cannon commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Who Am I?
This story has a spooky vibe that I am really enjoying. -
This is a horse of a whole 'nother color of incompatibility. Feeling attraction on some aspects of personality and revulsion on others... I can see they will have many conversations/arguments coming up!
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Phone sex with Matty lets Alex forget his dismay with Jake, at least temporarily.
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A fortuitous escape from the bandit hoard!
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To paraphrase Dorothy Parker, if all the boys on the UNC baseball team were laid from end to end, I wouldn't be surprised at all.
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And, under his breath, “I don’t plan to be doing this for long, anyhow.” “None of us did, Frog,” I reply under my own, “nary a one.” I wasn't looking to get choked up tonight, but here we are. Another compelling chapter.
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Quite a twist! Lalianus and Torryn continue their way to the capital.
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Alex is deeper in the hormonal fog in this chapter. I look forward to finding out who the mystery 'kissee' is with Jake and if he is relevant to the story!
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In the normal course of fiction, a big, emotional scene like this results in catharsis or an epiphany of some sort that establishes the scene's relevance to the course of the drama. The lack of such a gesture may mean that we readers will discover later that this scene is not part of the main drama of the story. Or maybe we find out that these are uncommonly oblivious characters that still need to be prodded into self-realization.
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That Something About Axel
andy cannon commented on Invnarcel's story chapter in That Something About Axel
Silas' POV is enlightening. H e has a lot of conflicting emotions locked up. -
An exploration of the underbelly of urban life, a scene that doesn't come up here very often. I am looking forward to reading the subsequent chapters!
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As the ancients wisely observed, "a friend in need is a friend indeed." Would that we all have similar assistance during these stressful times!
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Okay then. Let's see where Alex and Jake are headed with their youthful attraction. Young Love over the horizon?
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Long Weekend at the Lodge
andy cannon commented on Invnarcel's story chapter in Long Weekend at the Lodge
Nyx was just so clueless, vapid, giggly, entitled, rude, dismissive, spoiled, delusional. Ungrateful. I hated her. She sounds nice. -
I was not expecting the dead to be so petty in the afterlife... overlook, you know, the fact that someone killed them but get all irksome about removing footwear too quickly. SMH
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And another man falls to the callipygian charms of our Jody. He is working his way through the baseball roster. What team may be next on his radar?
