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  1. andy cannon

    Chapter 7

    Beautiful writing.
  2. andy cannon

    Chapter 9

    The grumpy Lieutenant Vane has set himself as an implacable enemy, especially of Jamie Blake, so batten down the hatches!
  3. The Devil in a Uniform HMS Absolute, The Morning After Morning broke over a sea still raw and brutalized, the storm’s scars carved into every spar and seam. The gale had spent its wrath, but what it left behind was not peace—it was hunger. The wind still snapped from the east, but the rain fell only in sullen gusts now, and the low light revealed a battered world of fractured spars and lines tangled like entrails. Water sluiced across the deck in oily rivulets as men bailed, la
  4. andy cannon

    Chapter 5

    A really great chapter. I like the dynamic between Connor and Andrew.
  5. andy cannon

    Chapter 1

    Interesting story so far. Can't wait until Chubby meets Rex!
  6. A Ghost in the Storm HMS Absolute -- Pre-dawn After Pitt vanished below, the storm began its crawl across the horizon, black as a funeral shroud. Blake stood alone at the taffrail, the salt wet on his shoulders, eyes fixed on the jagged hem of that darkening line. The storm was stalking nearer now, its edges alive with silent lightning that lit the underbellies of clouds like coals under ashes. Wind stirred his coat; the weight of the moment with Pitt still clung to him, unfin
  7. andy cannon

    Chapter 3

    Liam is curious, envious, suspicious and confused. Can't wait to see where this leads!
  8. andy cannon

    Chapter 7

    Excellent idea! But first there is a storm literally on the horizon and the dangers lurking there,
  9. andy cannon

    Chapter 7

    I am happy you are enjoying it!
  10. andy cannon

    Chapter 7

    This chapter is only 2 or 3 away from when I realized that I couldn't maintain scrupulous fidelity to the era and arrive at anything like a happy conclusion. You are correct that these events take place some 75 years before there was even a term for same-sex attraction as an orientation, so I operate under the illusion that the lack of an appropriate label would affect how the other characters react to them. Certainly there was a coterie of rather mincing, fashion-obsessed men around the Prince of Wales, later the Prince Regent, that any self-respecting thirteen year old today would deride as "gaaaay" but were nevertheless impregnating every woman in sight from duchesses to milk maids. Other times, other customs. I hope that the compromises I make will satisfy everyone.
  11. The Reckoning at Midday The Deck—-14:00 The Caribbean sun hung heavy overhead, turning the deck into a kiln. The sails groaned above like slumbering beasts, shifting in the slow wind. The Absolute plowed on toward some unknown port, her course hinted at only by the dense humidity and the dark, hazy promise of land on the horizon. Jamie Blake had kept his distance these last days, stalking the edges of Lieutenant Pitt’s line of sight like a wolf circling its prey, warily, de
  12. Hmmmm... Troy is in quite a pickle vis-a-vis the mysterious Theo.
  13. andy cannon

    Chapter 4

    This is beautiful writing: "It’s so suffocating, this feeling. I’m genuinely terrified—terrified of my own heart, and also terrified of his feelings. I’m afraid that I might actually end up liking him. I mean… being one-sidedly infatuated with him is bad enough, but what if I end up loving him even more than this? What would happen then? Wouldn’t my heart just burst and kill me even more painfully? And what about his feelings? If he finds out I like him, but he doesn’t feel anything for me at all—aside from me facing humiliation, heartbreak, my knees buckling, my spirit breaking, and complete confusion—he himself would probably feel awful: shocked, sad, angry. Or worse still, would he end up hating me? And if he genuinely feels that way, I’d be hurt even more—face humiliated, heart broken, knees shattered, self utterly confused, magnified a hundredfold, plus getting wasted, ruining my grades, quitting sports, and even losing friends on top of it all."
  14. Poor Noah! Cheating sux (and cheaters, too)!
  15. andy cannon

    Chapter 16

    Another great chapter awash in emotions and hormones. Jonah continues to be a delight. Noah is threatening to work my last nerve. “What about Spring Break? Or summer?” I asked. “What are you going to do then?” “I’ll figure it out,” he said softly. “Don’t tell anyone. Please. Don’t tell Mr. G. Don’t ruin this.” This is a heavy burden to lay on someone!
  16. A great chapter exploring family dynamics. Jay makes me both happy and sad I don't have a younger brother!
  17. andy cannon

    Chapter 2

    This is a very well written story that has my attention. The guys' disproportionate reaction to the quip was surprising, as was the subsequent exploration of a budding foot fetish? And humiliation kink? Not my jam, but I am on board to see where this goes.
  18. andy cannon

    Cabin

    Great chapter! Very erotic.
  19. andy cannon

    Chapter 6

    This is a very helpful discussion since that level of awareness and acceptance was not my intention at all. I was trying to show her support for traits of empathy and compassion that were making him a good leader. I appreciate the close reading and the comments!
  20. Great story! Interesting twist(s),
  21. andy cannon

    Chapter 15

    That conversation with Jack is heartbreaking. A powerful story!
  22. Another fantastic chapter that brings back memories for those of us around in those days.
  23. andy cannon

    Slav intrat

    I like the vivid way you develop Slav, and your decision on how to present his speech is spot on!
  24. andy cannon

    Chapter 7

    Great chapter, with some honest, gritty conversation.
  25. andy cannon

    Chapter 8

    Great story! I also vote for a continuation!
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