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    Chapter 1

    I like the start.
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    Anthology Poem One

    Thank you JoAnn. Your support seems neverending. Thank you for me and the many others you give it too.
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    Anthology Poem One

    Thank you Ashi. This food is probably fast food then because I only took a few minutes to prepare.
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    Anthology Poem One

    Thanks for reading Carrington. I like words more than what they say.
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    Anthology Poem One

    Hey Cole, thanks for reading and making a comment. I tend to be governed strongly by emotion to the dismay of all the logical in the world... I know it takes both. My emotion is logical to me.
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    Anthology Poem One

    Thanks Bill. I always wanted to be a real painter.
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    Anthology Poem One

    Thank you Nostalgic. I like your comment.
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    Anthology Poem One

    Thank you Aditus. I remember your comment about my "unicorn picture" I posted some time ago.
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    Anthology Poem One

    Thank you for reading Louie. I'm a sexy guy, so I am just full of nuance The food reference, I don't know if I told you what I was thinking if it would help you see where it fits if it fits. I rather you have your own thoughts about the poem good or bad.
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    Anthology Poem One

    Thank you for reading Wayne and taking the time to comment. A poem wears a different expression for every reader. It can even be closed and remote to one and revealing and shocking to another. I don't plan out my poems I have no motive except to be in someway "satisfied" by making something I think has value. They are what they are.
  11. Lol, I thought he was gone "disappeared", so I didn't think his stories were on here. Lol woops Thanks Red, I will take a look.
  12. Where did you find his stories, site name or link ?
  13. Been awhile since I puzzled myself with one of these... instant poetry. Just add your own common sense, I was all out.
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    Anthology Poem One

    Weathered Foster A down pour of sunshine Fun time Has me on the run A tickling wind Sickening sin Perturbs me I’m not that easy Any more Outside of breeze And blue sky and white cloud The day couldn’t get worse This clarity of horizon Expands my isolation Discontented Desolation Pointless My destination Grounded with fright This light The sight Of blight Bright spectrum specters Flowers and birds Bees and things Getting busy Goddamn misery I want A little thunder A little lightening
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    Doris Day

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GUVT1NZtZPo
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    Lovin' High Places

    Enjoyed your story, read it because JoAnn mentioned it.
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    Chapter 12

    Thanks for the new chapter.
  18. The first time I read this I gave it a like... this time I left you this... write some more.
  19. Thanks for the new chapter, I enjoyed it.
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    Chapter 17

    Exciting chapter.
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    Chapter 15

    Yay! You posted ! Going to have fun now !
  22. Enjoyed reading your story, thank you.
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    Josephus

    I liked this chapter.
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    Enslaved

    You mention Gardentuber in you closing comments. I remember him fondly. Enjoying the story too.
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    Runaway

    Is Ulee a nick name for Ulysses ? And is this symbolic of your story to unfold?
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