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Thanks for reading Carrington. I like words more than what they say.

Hey Cole, thanks for reading and making a comment. I tend to be governed strongly by emotion to the dismay of all the logical in the world... I know it takes both. My emotion is logical to me.

Thanks Bill. I always wanted to be a real painter.

Thank you Nostalgic. I like your comment.

Thank you Aditus. I remember your comment about my "unicorn picture" I posted some time ago.

Thank you for reading Louie. I'm a sexy guy, so I am just full of nuance The food reference, I don't know if I told you what I was thinking if it would help you see where it fits if it fits. I rather you have your own thoughts about the poem good or bad.

Thank you for reading Wayne and taking the time to comment. A poem wears a different expression for every reader. It can even be closed and remote to one and revealing and shocking to another. I don't plan out my poems I have no motive except to be in someway "satisfied" by making something I think has value. They are what they are.

Weathered Foster A down pour of sunshine Fun time Has me on the run A tickling wind Sickening sin Perturbs me I’m not that easy Any more Outside of breeze And blue sky and white cloud The day couldn’t get worse This clarity of horizon Expands my isolation Discontented Desolation Pointless My destination Grounded with fright This light The sight Of blight Bright spectrum specters Flowers and birds Bees and things Getting busy Goddamn misery I want A little thunder A little lightening

Been awhile since I puzzled myself with one of these... instant poetry. Just add your own common sense, I was all out.

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Enjoyed your story, read it because JoAnn mentioned it.

Thanks for the new chapter.

The first time I read this I gave it a like... this time I left you this... write some more.

Thanks for the new chapter, I enjoyed it.

Exciting chapter.

Yay! You posted ! Going to have fun now !

Enjoyed reading your story, thank you.

I liked this chapter.

You mention Gardentuber in you closing comments. I remember him fondly. Enjoying the story too.

Is Ulee a nick name for Ulysses ? And is this symbolic of your story to unfold?

So glad you posted a new chapter. Been watching for an update. Really enjoy the story.

Elder here. Never had a cell phone for years, wouldn't buy one, My first one was a gift from my brother and I duly promised to keep it charged and to carry it with me always. I did that for years and hardly ever used it. Most of the time it was turned off in my pocket. Then I bought my first laptop. It was hard to resist them finally and I succumbed to their siren call. Anyway tech changed the way I lived and I came to love my smart phone as well. Basically my favorite part of the phone is the camera! I can take pictures anytime anywhere and send them to my laptop where I can play with them. I love doing this. Taking selfies is fun. You can see anything negatively or you can join in and play the game. Giving likes to people you care about, is more how I see the issue. I like taking pictures including selfies. I take them of me. But I do think it is rude to take pictures of others and post them on the internet without their permission. This selfie will self destruct in short order.

Thanks, I enjoyed Mrs Benson.

Enjoying your story.

Hey ! Don't tell me this is complete ? I want chapter two !