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Kileoli

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  1. Kileoli

    Exposure

    It's not a triangle Harry has, it's an open square with possibilities. Nice chapter
  2. Gonna check at some point. Thanks
  3. Kileoli

    Fore!

    It depends if the cow moves or not. I mean if you wait long enough it comes to you
  4. That was funny though a bit crazy and im glad I don't eat meat. So I gotta dig in all your stories and find Addison and Stanleys universe. Addison is a bit off but it's still tolerable funny.
  5. Kileoli

    Fore!

    That was one hilarious story. I know golfing is not my thing and I am good at it in the level of Addison. I see the ball I see the cow but it simply hits the cow on the head.
  6. Kileoli

    Routine

    Poor Harry , so many people interested and nobody really there for him to have something serious. As hot as Lewis looks, I really don't like him. It's not fine to mess with someone who obviously has problems.
  7. Kileoli

    Adjustment

    The office scene could be mine, running into uncomfortable conversations, boring meetings but I'm good with the IT part. Spencer...he's gonna be a sweet addition to Harry's gossiping colleagues...
  8. Kileoli

    Edinburgh

    That was so mean of Harry wanting to find a new coffee shop, but nice start.
  9. That should be enough motivation to finish your stuff. Many people like reading completed stories.
  10. Thanks for all the thoughts, changes and all the work you put here. So to the question "What parts of the site are hardest to use on mobile?" Posting a new story and trying to edit it can sometimes get quite annoying. The spacing doesn't work or the paragraphs are a mess after moving parts a few times. These problems do not exist in the desktop view. It's really easy to post. "What author tools or feedback would help writers stay motivated?" There are already lots of nice ways to motivate authors but maybe more visualized statistics of views, likes, reviews. Or some extra forum like section for authors to discuss thoughts with their readers. I mean of course they can make things on forums but people who read forums do not necessarily read the story and vice versa. So maybe something like a prologue section that authors and readers can discuss the certain story.
  11. I like the or logic but you have a good point. Limiting things and giving fewer options lead to better results
  12. It's cool how the widget appears on top without being imposing. I mean I can easily navigate to where I want but if I scroll a bit I can use the guided search. It works pretty well but is it me or I can choose one genre i want and add several genres which I don't want? Can't I choose several genres? Another thought for someone who is new and doesn't know the GA structure, if I choose recent stories, it gives me the recent stories but of course not from the beginning of a series/ books. So I might end up starting with a second book from a series. Is it too much to give a warning or additional choice? Sorry Myr, my brain works in a way to make things fool-proof and avoid accidents. 😅
  13. Kileoli

    Chapter 11

    That was one of hell of a cliffhanger/ ending. I started with oh avatar and ended with...what?! What did just happen? Did Rhaelce just dumped Malik because he has super powers. They will get back together, right?!
  14. Kileoli

    Chapter 10

    That was an intelligent sad way of showing Malik's past and his guilt. Will the nightmare get worse so Rhaelce gets closer to Malik? I wish I had read this chapter earlier so I could use the "innocent " question of knowing the word kiss to kiss some of those cute Japanese boys.😅,,
  15. Kileoli

    Chapter 9

    Apart from being so classical? At least her name is not mononoké. Sorry for me it was lamely funny. It's absolutely fine and a great choice of name. Why do I keep on saying the wrong things?😅 I apologize. BTW not my type of story to read but you got me hooked. ( All is positively meant).
  16. Kileoli

    Chapter 9

    I like the new characters but seriously Chihiro from Japan?!🤣
  17. Kileoli

    H.O.M.E.

    It feels like,it is never going to end. It was totally strange to some how fly by Ukraine.
  18. Kileoli

    H.O.M.E.

    Thanks for reading and commenting.
  19. Ly was different. He saw his surroundings differently. There were way too many worlds he had to belong to. His train of thought had no breaks, and his emotions got too loud at times. Sometimes he simply wanted to disappear. Welcome to the world of Ly trying to figure out how to breathe in his chaotic life without losing himself or the man he loves.
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    H.O.M.E.

    Ly stared out the window, the monstrous turbine blocking half of his view, yet beyond it the clouds slowly turning orange, reflecting the approaching day. They were flying back home. He looked back at the map tracking the plane now flying slowly over Europe and there it was, another point with a name under it, "Kyiv". That word used to mean a lot to him, "home". He stared back at the screen, following the movements of the small plane. His thoughts drifted back to the news. The small planes,
  21. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    I'm wondering what Arthur took to stay awake ? I want that capybara, it almost weighs as much as me so I can probably ride it and we can move around time visiting different places. I will let him go do what capybaras do while i look for nice friendly guys.
  22. Welcome to GA and have fun reading and writing here
  23. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    No learn effect here. Humans are hopeless. Good that I'm a chatbot 😅
  24. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    That's true, but then that's how I do things anyway. Dylan's song though nice is so unrealistic, it will never work.
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