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Kileoli

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  1. Kileoli

    Fore!

    That was one hilarious story. I know golfing is not my thing and I am good at it in the level of Addison. I see the ball I see the cow but it simply hits the cow on the head.
  2. That should be enough motivation to finish your stuff. Many people like reading completed stories.
  3. Thanks for all the thoughts, changes and all the work you put here. So to the question "What parts of the site are hardest to use on mobile?" Posting a new story and trying to edit it can sometimes get quite annoying. The spacing doesn't work or the paragraphs are a mess after moving parts a few times. These problems do not exist in the desktop view. It's really easy to post. "What author tools or feedback would help writers stay motivated?" There are already lots of nice ways to motivate authors but maybe more visualized statistics of views, likes, reviews. Or some extra forum like section for authors to discuss thoughts with their readers. I mean of course they can make things on forums but people who read forums do not necessarily read the story and vice versa. So maybe something like a prologue section that authors and readers can discuss the certain story.
  4. I like the or logic but you have a good point. Limiting things and giving fewer options lead to better results
  5. It's cool how the widget appears on top without being imposing. I mean I can easily navigate to where I want but if I scroll a bit I can use the guided search. It works pretty well but is it me or I can choose one genre i want and add several genres which I don't want? Can't I choose several genres? Another thought for someone who is new and doesn't know the GA structure, if I choose recent stories, it gives me the recent stories but of course not from the beginning of a series/ books. So I might end up starting with a second book from a series. Is it too much to give a warning or additional choice? Sorry Myr, my brain works in a way to make things fool-proof and avoid accidents. 😅
  6. Kileoli

    Chapter 11

    That was one of hell of a cliffhanger/ ending. I started with oh avatar and ended with...what?! What did just happen? Did Rhaelce just dumped Malik because he has super powers. They will get back together, right?!
  7. Kileoli

    Chapter 10

    That was an intelligent sad way of showing Malik's past and his guilt. Will the nightmare get worse so Rhaelce gets closer to Malik? I wish I had read this chapter earlier so I could use the "innocent " question of knowing the word kiss to kiss some of those cute Japanese boys.😅,,
  8. Kileoli

    Chapter 9

    Apart from being so classical? At least her name is not mononoké. Sorry for me it was lamely funny. It's absolutely fine and a great choice of name. Why do I keep on saying the wrong things?😅 I apologize. BTW not my type of story to read but you got me hooked. ( All is positively meant).
  9. Kileoli

    Chapter 9

    I like the new characters but seriously Chihiro from Japan?!🤣
  10. Kileoli

    H.O.M.E.

    It feels like,it is never going to end. It was totally strange to some how fly by Ukraine.
  11. Kileoli

    H.O.M.E.

    Thanks for reading and commenting.
  12. Ly was different. He saw his surroundings differently. There were way too many worlds he had to belong to. His train of thought had no breaks, and his emotions got too loud at times. Sometimes he simply wanted to disappear. Welcome to the world of Ly trying to figure out how to breathe in his chaotic life without losing himself or the man he loves.
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    H.O.M.E.

    Ly stared out the window, the monstrous turbine blocking half of his view, yet beyond it the clouds slowly turning orange, reflecting the approaching day. They were flying back home. He looked back at the map tracking the plane now flying slowly over Europe and there it was, another point with a name under it, "Kyiv". That word used to mean a lot to him, "home". He stared back at the screen, following the movements of the small plane. His thoughts drifted back to the news. The small planes,
  14. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    I'm wondering what Arthur took to stay awake ? I want that capybara, it almost weighs as much as me so I can probably ride it and we can move around time visiting different places. I will let him go do what capybaras do while i look for nice friendly guys.
  15. Welcome to GA and have fun reading and writing here
  16. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    No learn effect here. Humans are hopeless. Good that I'm a chatbot 😅
  17. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    That's true, but then that's how I do things anyway. Dylan's song though nice is so unrealistic, it will never work.
  18. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for the comment. Thing is I don't want to fight, let's go for peace.
  19. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for your comment.
  20. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for your comment. Let's hope humanity can answer some of these questions at least.
  21. It looked like a small beautiful hill resting quietly in the middle of the park, surrounded by short stones as if someone was still trying to protect a secret. In front of it hung a sign filled with tiny writing: 70,000 people buried beneath the earth, their ashes burned beyond recognition, their names dissolved into history, their souls perhaps still wandering somewhere between this world and the next, forever lost and forever waiting to be remembered. It was just an ordinary step attached
  22. For the souls who never found peace.
  23. No, no, no! I have delete that video not that R takes the flight to San Francisco instead of Osaka! But thanks for the good sex. 🤣🤣
  24. Cheating, leading on or simply not saying the whole truth? After five days in Japan, I have met a bunch of interesting guys. The Japanese are actually very friendly although their English is horrible. So it's almost impossible to have nice conversations and not type things on the phone for translation. The culture is still very different. I can say they are more open to sex than Europe, they see it as something totally natural as long as you keep it to yourself and don't show it in public. So I decided to stop being a prude and try my chances before the husband is here. So today I texted Masa, the guy I met bouldering , and asked him to meet me at the climbing gym again. To my surprise he accepted. He came a bit later because in Japan most people start pretty late, around 10 and stay till 6 pm. We climbed a bit together and chatted about random things. His English was not as good as I thought and he was way younger than I remembered. He suggested to climb till 10 and then go drink together, the Japanese like going out drinking, but I told him I had my talk early morning but maybe we can meet at weekend. I don't know why but I didn't feel like telling him my husband will be there too. At some point he asked if he could take a photo with me, and to be honest he got really close. We hanged out some more and we really had fun encouraging and challenging each other. Just short before leaving, I asked him if he had Whatsapp so I could text him easier. Obviously it's not something popular here. So when he finally texted me and I told him where I was staying he said he lived not that far and we could hang out at his place being all alone tonight. So I had that feeling there was a good chance that something more could happen. That's when I thought do I really want something more happen. I mean I still had time for an hour or two for him to show me his place. But when my phone vibrated showing a message from R, saying he was getting on the plane, i thought no, I don't want to explore so I showed Masa my profile picture saying they were my two daughters and my husband. Suddenly he looked very sad. I guess if I had said that was my wife and she's not here so let's have fun he could have lived with it. Although I disappointed Masa, he still texted me later saying we could meet at his place on the weekend. So I'm not sure he really understood that my husband will be here tomorrow. On the way back to hotel i called R and told him about Masa. He said he thought I had already told the poor guy the first time and asked if I didn't have my ring on. ( Something I never have when climbing). For a second I thought was he jealous?! Because after that he was like just wank tonight, we can have hot sex tomorrow. 😂 So thanks to @Jason Rimbaud I made a video for R, doing exactly what he asked and sent him. I hope the police does not arrest him for having porn on his phone 🤣 I guess I'm totally fine with my body count. I really look forward to seeing R and exploring Japan together. And I have a feeling we will probably argue the first two hours but I don't care, make up sex is always good.
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