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Kileoli

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  1. Kileoli

    Chapter 4

    Tailie and the Malik are back together.... well almost. Send tailie take a bath or something
  2. That was hell of an (open) ending. I have never wished Christmas t oarrive so soon and it's just summer. Ok I kept my promise and read the story
  3. I'm just glad I didnt start reading before you posted all. I don't like cliffhangers.
  4. I feel bad for the couch... who's gonna sit there?
  5. I didn't like Ethan from the beginning, he's not helping my opinion. Is something more going to happen with those videos?
  6. They are totally crossing the wrong lines. As for the father scene, I sorta expected more with Percy being so afraid and dramatic about his dad figuring out
  7. It's getting crazier and complexer. As hot as a threesome it could turn, Five had a point. He has to explore things with Percy first.
  8. I don't like those two tresspassing guys and I don't like Ethan, he gives me a negative feeling..... As for the rest for someone whi is not into BDSM....wow that was hot...I wanna try it too :
  9. I am having so much fun reading it and 'I wonder how far they go.
  10. Next time I will read your stories right away. It takies a lot longer to read all the comments than the chapter itself. And Baby oil is a lot of fun to use for a massage of any kind pity they didn't have it
  11. I accidentally managed to turn one hell of a hot scene into the most non-arousing thing by using chrome's read out loud option while cooking... But it's ok, I'm sure there's more to come.
  12. Oh no I'm late..so congrats Ben, is there a cake? Thank you for sharing your stories with us I'm looking forward to the ending and how things happen....wait I have to start reading the whole 11 chapters....that reminds me of another story @Jason Rimbaud I have to read I may stop annoying the author's to write more before I have read everything...not! Did I say you're awesome, Ben?! Keep on writing and let the girls @Thirdly @CassieQ help with the smuts...they have observed any noted everything for...too long😅😁
  13. This is really good and I like both of them. If this five is a bit like your friend ....that explains a bunch of things. I promise not to pick on you till o finish this story.
  14. Kileoli

    Garlic or Love

    That was one hell of a combination, going from so serious to I need to add garlic to the shopping list. What hurt really was "Standing still is a direction. Blade or gun is a choice." I wish it was that easy, sometimes it's not a choice nor standing a direction but a decision to survive. The garlic part was awesome. Who knows how many times I bought garlic, used 2-3 cloves and the rest I had to through away after months of not knowing what to do. So no i have dried garlic in 4 different sizes and I use it instead. It's also safer for the meetings the day after.
  15. Thanks Myr. That's really helpful.
  16. To have someone sitting with you in the dark is a blessing and a curse. Still it's amazing you keep on going.
  17. I hope it is the way you say. Because right now I know I won't be nominated for the price of best papa in the world. But it's true. The gender and number of parents don't count as long as they feel love and support. Thanks for taking the time and commenting.
  18. If sarcasm and honesty were charming, you could be popular...but it's not. Reading a few of your stories/poems and nope I haven't finished frosted hearts but I'm on chapter 2, i can say your stories are not fame Material. They are very entertaining, well written and idk typical Jason. But nothing most people read/ comment. Alone the claim that you took the name of your straight boy crush as your author name says something... Nope. I have no idea what it says. You are still very blunt and loud in expressing your opinion. Hhmm loud is wrong, maybe unique And no matter how drowned in my misery I am, whenever I read something from you, I get distracted or smile. So why haven't I finished everything yet? Well, because it's too difficult to read something on a drowned mood. Now I have a challenge from you. Challenge: do I want to find and read all those drugged writings on AD? Nope, I guess they're too dark Ok, now I claim im done with reading your blog so I can move to a story
  19. Kileoli

    Chapter 3

    I told Cassie it's avatar in a new world I really like them, though except Chihiro, they really cant do much with their powers, let's see if they get any better. I still hope that Tailie ex of the Malik come back. At this rate I'm afraid I get only girl sex *Li shudders*
  20. That was one hell of a view. I knew I had to memorize some verses and give them back as a child, and I know as a teenager I begged a god to fix my head. I don't remember the shit the priests said but I know when I first a boy I was so ashamed and so lost in guilt that I seeked the first church I could find and begged for forgiveness, shit afraid of going to hell. I never asked questions, I never looked at things as plausible, at some point I asked myself what kind of a sick god can it be that no matter what people do they would never be forgiven and always somehow end in hell. When I asked my question loud , I was punished with days of silence or guilt trips till I confessed I was wrong. I hated that I god and I hated myself till I begged and tried to stop my whole existence, being the masochist god he was he made sure I never succeeded in my mission of self destruction. And this god haunted me so long till finally the boy I kissed told me it was totally ok not to believe in any god so we could do more than kissing. However the god was not happy so he said, ok fine Li you can ignore me for now but I will make sure you suffer every weekend for denying me when your father in law prepared his service for sundays. Reading what you wrote made me question my entire genius brain. I know I'm not dumb but how could I blindly follow that shit and never question the narration?! Brainwash is a powerful method who can mess up even the most genius people. Thanks for all the research you put into this. Now I know theres no fucking hell to be afraid of as an afterlife. Hell is now and here so it's fine to die when i want. And nope I won't bug you again for the rest of your unfinished Stories, cause there's none.
  21. When you leave Li/Ly and Google alone...so some history check: "The Hebrews made a deal with Alexander, a deal that allowed them to gain a religious foothold in regions otherwise not available to them due to the Muslim influence of the Persian’s. " Also, let's say that's quite wrong because Islam came a lot later. Persians had their own god but apparently they didn't shove it in other nations asses, so Hebrews could let their god get strong. Muslims came later. Took over wherever they could, fucked people, ruined cultures and what not and they claimed that Alexander the great was a King-Prophet.... According to some old Muslim scholars at least. So in the end....let's promote the killer to the prophet...so a ruthless god needs ruthless prophets 😅
  22. Ben that was one touching story. When you mentioned the son, I knew where it was going but then I hoped it was just a stupid uncomfortable divorce. As a parent, losing a child is the last thing I want to experience or better said, id rather be dead.
  23. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    It hurt a lot to write it but felt good too. It took me so long to accept that he and his brother don't exist anymore. It makes me very sad and angry. But there's little one can do except cherishing the memories. Thanks for reading and commenting.
  24. Interesting view and a sad reality about many Christian varieties. I wonder how would Jason be if he were not conditioned to be gay
  25. I have bitten all my finger nails. You took the world cliffhanger literally. What. a way to start.
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