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Kileoli

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  1. Artem, I am writing to you because there is no other way left to tell you how badly I miss you. How much I hate it for you to be where you are, how much I hate your memories attached to a place we once called home. You were not someone who needed to be announced. You stood there with your stupid humor and loud laughs, always making fun of everything so that no one could take you seriously and still you knew more than the rest of us. You didn’t speak about secrets and aches. You waited
  2. This is in the memory of a dear freind lost in the violence of war.
  3. A painful circle of events with a happy ending and they probably have a lot to experience together.
  4. Kileoli

    Chapter 13

    I don't like pods. Not the pink ones. I look forward to reading the next book. But two chapters per day is too much. I haven't started the knight story yet🥲
  5. Kileoli

    Chapter 8

    It's a relief at least Lilith got her chocolate. But bureaucratic documentation is not always bad. You have time to do other things till they get to you with their regularities.
  6. Kileoli

    Chapter 7

    So chocolate ist the best medicine in the end And Germans don't do schedules, they do appointments with doodles first in this case 😂
  7. Kileoli

    Chapter 20

    Applause. That was all creepy , but at least a great ending
  8. Kileoli

    Chapter 19

    I guess it's more because it was suddenly and un expected. I like non linear stories, but just randomly switching to this narration in chapter 19 is not easy to follow, and I think the shock of seeing Ben and Tim hiding in the bathroom was better than Justin taking the car. Actually it was interestingly fun, I like looking at the director walking to his Finale, pure Schadenfreude 😂
  9. Kileoli

    Chapter 19

    Then good luck with your surgery. Your crazy readers can wait..Focus on you
  10. Kileoli

    Chapter 18

    You really have weird sources of inspiration.:)
  11. Kileoli

    Chapter 6

    A pink bubble gum spreading across the town, inside smells like artificial strawberry but if it explodes it is going to stick to everyone. But why our dear Ellis is protecting the Hartley's? I thought he didn't like the professor.
  12. Kileoli

    Chapter 18

    I wonder if Tim comes for the rebound round.
  13. Kileoli

    Chapter 11: Hybrid

    I started with the first part since I couldn't sleep but I didn't feel like getting out of bed. The second part happened later and it was not planned to be so. It was more like I'm gonna check something quick, which took hours. It's not panic or treading water , it's more like a flood, drowning or a burn.
  14. Kileoli

    Chapter 11: Hybrid

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  15. Kileoli

    Chapter 5

    It's the inner soul that must work. It's just rituals and outer body feelings or something like that. IDK. If I can't have sex then I don't want to be fused.
  16. Kileoli

    Chapter 5

    It's getting better and better. A Tain- Charlie -Tyler triangle will be perfect, with Tayler getting the professor's mind and body at the same time.... But the new Chloe is so wrong, I miss the mean sister filming everything. Is there a scene of Morgan and Lilith making out too?
  17. Kileoli

    Chapter 17

    Logic check: they said they couldn't hear Ben and Tim because they were staring at the laptop, so basically they could see and hear the boys in Ben's room. But then Ben talked to Tim telling him his plan and being a wildcard, so they know the three of them know. What surprise can it be then? And something about the radios, they can pretty much control their phones, track them and everything. So how does it work that they go to their cars, drive or sit or whatever and put their phone in the Faraday bags to use the radios. So technically they know where they are, why nobody comes to film them? And this whole watching thing is real creepy, I do cover the camera of my laptop and we have a shoebox in the dining room that all the phones go there during the night. I thought I was being paranoid...your story is not helping 😅
  18. Kileoli

    Noose

    So back to the beginning with Theo pushing Jack and Vince away, but this time they are in a creepy setting. Will the ghost of His pack help or do they watch quietly how Theo hurt his mates?
  19. Kileoli

    Chapter 11: Hybrid

    You should get yourself one, if you don't have. I don't share 😉 As random as this story sounds, it was 80% reality. All thanks to @drsawzall. I'm still sore. 🤐
  20. Kileoli

    Chapter 11: Hybrid

    If the gas prices keep on going up, they have to do the same. Or take the train then they're back to the snow chapter without snow. Or Liam stays home and becomes a stay home dad.... wait but that was Rick's dream job. And the Prius is a sexy car....
  21. Kileoli

    Chapter 11: Hybrid

    It's a nice car
  22. Liam woke with something already there. He didn’t move, not yet, just stayed where he was and let it register—a narrow strip of warmth along his arm, not quite pressure, but enough that it didn’t belong to him. He kept his eyes closed. Behind him, Rick was asleep. Liam knew it before he checked, but he listened anyway, following the rhythm of his breathing, the way it dragged slightly at the edges, slower than when he was awake, unguarded, without the small adjustments Rick made w
  23. Kileoli

    Chapter 4

    So that's the solution, Taine needs to visit Orel. I can totally understand why the demons fear Orel. I'm just trying to imagine how Orel applies his systems to magical circles. Scaaaarrrryyy😅
  24. Kileoli

    Chapter 3: 10/10

    Then you should write a story about your fancy oven and the small appliances ( I wonder how they can be used in a story)
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