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I didn't know about the first and last name thing. Thinking about it you're right. We have this neighbor that even refers to herself with the last name and it took me 2 years to make her use the desired pronouns and my first name, when talking to me since I didn't feel like using the proper pronouns talking to her ( no, not the "it"or "they". I'm not non- binary, at most dimension-less. There's the you and the polite you (du/Sie) in German, and if you mess them up.... Oh the stroke, I forgot that and true you didn't say anything so I have to keep on wondering what happened between 1987 and 2014 ( besides Taylor and Charlie's birth). So we're out of Merrickville and into the demonic bureaucratic world of Mr. Ellis and some femdom?! Don't forget to warn us when the girls start manipulating Charlie.
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Oh sorry guys, I gotta refresh the page before commenting. Someone was pulling the same conclusions 😅
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Ok, there were not so much new info. You avoided telling us the story of Michael and Ellis, can it be that he saved mr. Devil and died so Ellis has to compensate by doing something for Taine. Still it doesn't make sense, the photo belongs to 1987 but Ellis had been trying to pay back the last eleven years. So does it mean that Taine and Michael broke up a lot earlier?! BTW why are we calling Alistair with his last name. And since you finished the third series can we assume that Charlie doesn't get his body back or learns a lesson and become a demon hunter and we should attend the burial of the professor with the real Charlie, Chloe and Taylor?!
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Then you should refer to Ashley properly with it or is it they?! And you win the price of "best non-binary" couple written in GA or a badge ...there should be a badge for it , right?
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The game is on. So if the player/ chapter introduction rate is 1 player/ chapter. We will have 9 chapters to get the whole pieces and some walk-arounds to develop strategies. @Topher Lydon Are you done with the writing or is there a chance to change the ending? It's so creepy knowing they are probably going to fall really hard for each other and some time later being forced to break up or outed in Tim's fall. I'm not sure how much I want to be reminded how easily we are watched and manipulated on a daily basis. I probably go watch that video from an influencer telling people about the wellness trend of house burping instead....or maybe not cause I knew it already. * Read with the gotteral unspeakable consonants of " Stoßlüften"*
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Don't blame the @akascrubber, this line was a bit confusing: "He quickly regained her composure, storming off in the opposite direction. But the image was burned into Tim and Justin’s minds."🙃
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That was one quick peek into the royal life with a coming out story. It was really good, quick, efficient and an announcement. And what happened to the unicorn?
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Applause to Jack, he did convince the alpha to take their relationship to next level and the alpha got his own version of two in one. Where are the evil forces now? Hidden and watching them and waiting for the next round?
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That was an interesting fast track. So next time directly to the dentist.... But then as nice as my dentist is, she's not my type 😁
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This is something many people forget that Rick is 4 years younger and at the time just 22. So he had a few things to set for himself clear.
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I am sinking zat is not poẞible. But yea, probably you're right. I had to even google devoiced consonants. At least we read what we write or the other way round 🙃 and there are cool philosophers claiming to say wise things no one understands 😅
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This is really good and demonic. So Taine has a limited time to live again, Tyler has a chance to experience beyond the possible intellect of young people and the demon... he's gonna have a lot of fun. But this part was mean to such a beautiful language "the harsh, guttural consonants of the German language".
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The reasoning why they pretend anyway was good. But in the end it turned into a directed disaster. What will their PDA be? They have already hold hands and kissed so are they going to compare size or exchange socks?
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I wonder is it just dorky or there's more to it? Magical gay portals? Demons in rainbow shorts?
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Chapter 8: Chalk, tinder and fall
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 8: Chalk, tinder and fall
Jamie is a piece of work with his relationships, I often tell him I don't understand how he does it, his brother is more than enough for me. I doubt I'd ever kiss him like that but he gives awesome hugs😁 I just realized I mostly start with something which happened in reality and end up with fantasy in most of the stories. Maybe I should start a quiz which part was true.🤣 -
Chapter 8: Chalk, tinder and fall
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 8: Chalk, tinder and fall
That's what I like about malicious glee, I don't have to exactly continue where I left, so I probably won't continue from the Rubicon.😅 That's exactly my fear, I like "the idea" of adding 1-2 people short term to the relationship but whenever R really wanna do something I chicken out and talk him out of it. The honest answer is as messy and strong our relationship is, I don't wanna experiment there. R believes we are too crazy that noone would like to have us as individuals permanently. I don't know, humans are too complicated and at the end of the day, we are like any other family with two kids and the potential to fall apart. Hermine has way too many friends with divorced parents that every time we get too loud in our arguments, she freaks out, cries and begs us to stop.So it stays as a story. -
Chapter 8: Chalk, tinder and fall
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 8: Chalk, tinder and fall
A sexual Rubicon to cross?! Lol, I hope not. I'm not sure Rick/Liam can easily exist as single individuals again. And that was just my hair inspiration ( which went wrong in reality). Liam is 40 so he can't look so young?! As for Rick. there's a family picture at the beginning of the book😄 which strangely looks a lot like us. It still doesn't look close enough that people look and quickly say that's you so I haven't messed up with my prompting that much. -
@Topher Lydonconfessed he was in the train, how high is the chance he is Mr. Ellis?
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No, please no....it takes me weeks to get it out of my head!
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A seventeen year old does not have an easy life and you gave him the wisdom of a 70 old philosophy teacher, this is a nightmare. Is Charlie going to fall in love with the cyclist, which looks like Michael, too?
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Chapter 8: Chalk, tinder and fall
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 8: Chalk, tinder and fall
I wrote and edited the story at different time intervals, it can be that some parts repeat. Although I tried to delete these inconsistencies, there are still parts. I apologize -
Chapter 8: Chalk, tinder and fall
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 8: Chalk, tinder and fall
This story has a few new characters 1. Julia is the auditor neighbor with the cool e-tron Audi from chapter one which the car failed to purr. She's single and Rick finds her hot but she thinks from the two Liam is cooler, so he got to drive her car. 2 &3. Jamie is the second younger brother of Rick. He does not limit himself to one partner and sees himself as polyamorous. He used to come to family gatherings with a new partner each time so at some point nobody cared to learn the names or the people except Liam, believing even one night stands should be given a chance to introduce themselves. James is at the moment in relationship with Adriano ( the Italian boyfriend, 22 ) and Rose ( the girlfriend, 28). Rose and Adriano live together while Jamie shares his place with a friend and his wife. -
Chapter 8: Chalk, tinder and fall
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 8: Chalk, tinder and fall
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The evening crowd at the new climbing hall had thinned to that quieter hour when movement no longer dissolved immediately into noise, allowing individual sounds to travel through the tall space—the dull thud of a climber dropping onto the mats, the dry brush of chalked fingers across textured holds, the soft murmur of conversation rising and falling beneath the steel rafters overhead. A pale haze of chalk still hung in the warm air, barely visible except where it drifted through the beams of lig
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I have to admit, it sounded totally weird saying be a couple or I'll show the world you looked at him with big gentle eyes, but then if it's about the narrative, I can wait to see how you pull the rope tighter. Social media here they come! The game is on!
