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I know 🤣 but @Topher Lydondiscussed in Orel's story that the sausage was not to be replaced with any vegetables. So, now I'm confused. Im going to compare things with vagan sausages, should I compare length or width?

This was confusingly hilarious. It will be very complicated to undo it. What happened to the sausage protocol? You had the Deliveroo boy there and Charlie took the cucumber for the comparison? I thought the sausage was non- negotiable.

Ben knows what Time doing, the GM knows that Ben knows, so in the end Ben is the one playing with fire. If the pieces play well, they might become archivists, if archivists play well they might become GM, and who's the president snow here?

That was a nice twist. Gabriel must stay away from Sean or he messes up his whole mission

From what you said, then you had good parents. Children see the world differently, of course parents are responsible to give them the right devices for the future, the most important things are not materialistic things, as long as they feel safe and loved they're fine. Thing is kids really don't care about the newest switch games or sneakers. It's the adults definition of feeling good or important. However there are two things I learned over the years. People get used to their surroundings, if most people have only bread to eat or can hardly afford things, then it's the reality and actually people accept it easier. If most people have fancy stuff, then that's the reality, although they probably want to have more. The more one has, the more they want. The second thing, many of the things we have, we don't really need them, so I try hard not to buy the kids every new thing that they want and see, saying I didn't have it as a kid so they should have, rather to ask themselves if they really need it, is it really worth having it considering the environmental, social .... effect. And I can claim we've done a good job, they discuss with other kids to pick up their rubbish, save their money to buy a house or pay for toys they badly want, and pack an extra sandwich to take for a friend because the parents have no time to give the kid healthy food. T even pays attention to Nutriscore ( nutrition score A-E) and advises others to eat healthy. 😅 PS: I have however my own lego collection, I didn't have it as a kid and I need it as an older kid now, oh and I have my collection of expensive shoes 😅

All went wrong as in every thing went right? It functioned so easily so it could just go wrong, right? Was it me or was it intentional that the beginning seemed like the repetition of previous chapter to show the chaos?

Its good to have surprises, but my phone says you posted on 21.03 and I read it on Saturday, so if I think you are somewhere on the other side, then it should be Friday. It just doesn't make sense unless you have some time machine

Such a twist, and it's always someone you know. The question is if Sean has to entertain the senator's daughter and friends, does he get to entertain Gabriel again? And are Fridays your new posting schedule?!

Why nobody asked about Charlie's whereabouts during crystal shopping? And how can Lilith be at the dinner and the ritual?

This is absolutely crazy. I'm so mad I don't want to read the story anymore. On the other hand I want to see them burn. I put your name as a potential piece for their future games. Violent is the answer 😉

To some extent you are right about benefit packages and so on. But we're talking about Ukraine which was part of the USSR till 1991, but even after that was not completely economically independent, following the Russian financial crisis in 1998, hryvnia ( Ukrainian currency) crashed drastically and the banks had liquidity problems, the first bank notes were not even published in Ukraine but Canada and somewhere else. Unfortunately the memories are pretty vague and it's not easy to rely financial political history on the memories of a hormonal closeted teenager with anger problems and I'm way too lazy to do a proper research, so at the end I relied on those memories, which contained even barter trade. The concept was so absurd, I didn't include it. So, if it's not 100% correct, it was more than 50% correct. 🥲😅

The gloomy part is set and almost done for now. The next chapter or two looks better ( spring comes) and I may write them soon. Thanks to @drsawzall I feel motivated enough not to be depressed and work. ( As what I am supposed to do as a job 😅)

The envelope appeared on the table without announcement. Oleh set it down beside the salt cellar, its edge brought into line with the grain of the wood, a care that seemed less about the envelope itself than about what it had come to represent. The corner was creased, the paper worn where it had rested too long in a coat pocket, darkened by handling. No one asked about it. Leonid watched him hang his coat by the door, his hand lingering a moment as the fabric settled. For an instant it was

I thought you went there for a walk with Mr. Duck. But why dodging teenagers, poor things arent they your muse?

This book is a lot better and more fun, now I get what you meant. And their team is expanding, a threesome with an incubus, a dead boy with a succubus and Chloe with her camera🤣 But where are Charlie's ex friends the girlinskirt in or what was her name?

This was so good. I have already added pump room gardens to my travel destination. It has its own page on Wikipedia. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Royal_Pump_Room_Gardens

That's one thing with reality shows based on humiliation and suffering, and those watching them being really psychos, but the other thing is the cruelty of kids at school. There are enough cases of mobbing and bullying without being part of a game, that is scary. They start as early as kindergarten with cornering the kids who do not fit in their books. I didn't think six year old kids could be so cruel until they started bullying my daughter and nope, no adult interferes in such topics, the kids have to figure it out themselves. They preach about equality for everyone but when a kid is teased for having two dads, it's our problem to deal with the crying kid who refuses to go to kindergarten and cannot sleep alone anymore. Funny is when two years later a teacher accidentally locked up the mean kid for a short time in the classroom to think about his actions, the teacher was kicked out of the blue without saying bye to the class and someone needed hours of therapy and the support and understanding of his classmates. I'm not saying what the teacher did was right but sometimes I feel the same way. It's like the society has a way of protecting bullies or those who have fun hurting others. You did a great job showing how the teachers closed their eyes on Sam and kids like him.

Thanks for the warning at the beginning. Too slow to help, to blind to see and too indifferent to care. For some people humans lives are nothing, just a piece on their chess game.

Marcus should be very proud of himself for taking control and not giving Hunter the chance to manipulate him. That takes a lot of guts. In reality many victims walk back to their tormenters or never get away from them. Letting the abuser keep on abusing them.

That was a great sad chapter and one hell of a twist. As I started reading the story I was like what could really happen but this I didn't see. The emotions were so raw, it hurt. I hope life got better for you too.

It was different from the other two. Sadder and stronger still a happy ending. Eryk should help Mikey or he wouldn't have a chance to survive. I wonder if we get to see the boys again.

This was pretty interesting to have Mikey's view and the incident with Timmy. Aunt Sally was cool too. And everything worked perfect like a fairytale. What was confusing was the sudden you approach in the middle. But nice sweet story

How many more chapters do you have waiting? Is there a book 2?

It's on Netflix, juhu! I need chips, spicy sauce and where's my popcorn?! Wait. But Netflix is banned for me until I deliver the victory of a finished draft. Life is so unfair. * Creates more water stains on ceilings*

Where should they find their demon hunting thing? Are there online courses or should they follow Charlie's lead and read books? Chloe is my favorite character right now. Do you have a bitch fight between Chloe and the magical three coming into garden?