Kileoli

Honest, this chapter was just too much. I mean it hurt like hell. you did an amazing job describing the scenes and feelings. I was pretty shocked and very jealous of how Michas family reacted especially the background of the grandma and the blessing. It dug really deep into my memories. I think I'm gonna hate you for a while for suggesting this story. It really hit more than a chord and teg shooting scene didn't help at all. I need air, damn. And I don't think I can read the rest.

Reality check quiz: 1. Did Rick's dad just gave him the money or did he have to pay back with interest? 2. Was his dad ok with them meeting in Istanbul or had he thought his son had finally lost his mind? 3. Did anyone know what Liam and Rick were doing? 4. Did the cliche messed up room happened? 5. Could Liam behave and control his moods after a week of climbing and little sleep?

Rick should just let Liam get his beauty sleep or he gets very bitchy. At least he managed to be just slow and indifferent at the time. And the shuttle story is still one of the scariest moments in Rick's life. They were in Istanbul two more times and Rick adamantly refused to take shuttles or taxis. It was a pure nightmare for Liam navigating 4 big suitcases, 3 backpacks and 2 tired little monsters and a grumpy Rick to the airport using the subway and busses. The new airport is practically out of the city. Here is the map in case you've never been there.

Then my bad. 😅 But he's going to pay the debt, right?! @Topher Lydon He should ask Charlie what he had done in the first place.

That was a nice view to what goes on in your head. That was heavy dude!😂 I know I can't go to work without embarrassing myself if I had such vivid characters in my head.

Rick did not call Liam that night. The decision had followed him only as far as the edge of sleep, lingering in the back of his mind while the apartment settled into the quiet rhythms of early morning—pipes ticking faintly in the walls, the distant hum of traffic rising slowly from the street below. By the time he finally drifted off, the plan had dissolved into the same unfinished state as the browser window he had closed hours earlier, the entire idea of Turkey folding itself into the tem

Which repetitions?! OMG. Nope. I copy paste stuff 3-4 times, rewrite or change them another 3-4 times, then have to put them through some editing process, then email it and post it using my phone so it might be I messed up at some point and was too tired to see it. No one wants to be exposed to my unfiltered English... Let me know where they were and I'm gonna fix it. Thanks

Taine paid Charlie's debt without telling his parents or asking them for help.

That was a great beginning, so first I read something in the second person from you and now something in the first person but in reality it's a third person because it's telling the story of Evan and you did a great job on how it developed from before Evan was born to introducing him to the art of washing the clothes. It's sorta sad knowing Mary Ellen dies so suddenly but still very intriguing to read about the boys and probably how they deal with Michas family.

It was nice of Charlie to give Taine his blessing, so now Taine is free to do what he wants with Tyler. Yoohooo hot sex scenes for us! And he should be very thankful that Taine found him a hot boyfriend, paid his debt without telling Daddy and is on his way to get rid of the 3.5 angry witchy (ex?) girlfriends. So let's see the shopping and then the ring. Is Tyler going to help Taine buy and try his 🩲?! A rainbow unicorn shirt is good too.

I like them all smart, I have pretty much connected whatever I could, even the kids are smart. Unfortunately R is an older model so I couldn't integrate him. Must look for a new model, Jamie wrote his master on IoT so maybe I can integrate him 😂. But I am also a fan of light switches, analog stuff and offline clouds. That's why I hate most of smart home solutions and a fan of patching my own. I need to have control over smartness, im a smartass anyway...oh no, now I have another idea... "Digitalizing and integrating the sex toys into our smart home🙃"

The stakes get higher and higher. So basically they are not allowed to perform rehearsed things but the real thing, and from the other couple in the end they are going to break up or out Time. This story sounds like a nightmare.

Correction: Direct quote from R: " I wasn't emotionally involved at all, I was just very drunk when suggested and later too proud to back off"😅 And there goes my love story!😂

And I thought you're one of those nice authors who are not that mean to your characters! At least let Scott take a photo if Sean and Gabriel and post it here.

I just realized I made the spoiler for the next chapter which is not yet online😅

It was not nice of Sean leaving Gabriel without a note. Besides someone has to take things in their hand and push Michael and DJ into each other's arms or they will be unhappy and lonely forever. Considering how valuable Scott is you don't tend to kill him, right? He makes awesome photos. But then photos cants save him from this Asian-Latino, it's him hunting Gabriel and Scott, right? Though sounds too easy.

Out of curiosity, does it look like something like this? I don't know these things. We have two ovens ( 1 with microwave and the other with steamer?!) and then one extra stove(?) I'm not sure if they are called those things but they are fancy a bit and so much fun to use and I can connect them to our smart home ... As an after thought maybe Liam can install cameras to show the status of the meal, sending the pictures to PC to analyse and Rick can ask Alexa how much more time they have for the sex before the food burns .. thanks for the idea

Rick was pretty involved the same as Liam. The difference is it took Liam a while to accept his feelings and Liam would have never done anything if Rick hadn't initiated. As for your oven. I hope you have a new oven and have solved the problem ( does calling daddy work?) 😁 When you have problems with choosing the technical aspects the guy can help, financially they still call Rick's father. 😅

I respect your feeling and continue but I stop trying with the cliffhangers 😅

I just realized non linear stories have several problems: 1. It's sometimes confusing for the readers. 2. As the writer you should have considered every single detail beforehand because once you have it ended in a certain way the whole past stories have to end in that certain way so no place for errors and no place for new ideas. 3. Cliffhangers are a non-existent concept. As an example, I spent a while thinking how to end the chapter that it sounds like Rick decided against meeting Liam. After posting it I realized that was so stupid because the readers know they met in Türkiye. So....there's no point to make them hate each other, leave each other, break up with each other, marry a girl, have sex to make babies....it just doesn't shock the readers. Just the fact that nobody commented on Daria (Liam's girlfriend) says everything. I stop writing this story....I have spoiled everything.😂😅

Rick’s room had grown warmer over the course of the evening, not because the air outside had changed but because the quiet machinery of the desk had been running too long—the monitor casting a steady pale glow, the laptop fan pushing out its low mechanical breath, the desk lamp angled close enough to the wall that the plaster behind it absorbed a slow amber heat. The window stood open behind him, admitting a thin draft that carried the faint metallic smell of rain from somewhere deeper in the ci

Never send adults back to school! The three witches sounded scary. Are they going to make him drink love potions?

This chapter was just too much and creepy with real struggles, good job. Now I gotta see how I can close my Pandora box again.

Did you have a happy ending too?

Second person is a big challenge to write and read but telling a whole story with it is a work of art. A sad story with a happy ending