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The platform held a mild, uneven warmth, the kind that gathered in patches where the sun broke through moving clouds and then disappeared again when the light shifted. The concrete was dry but not yet fully heated, still carrying a faint memory of the morning chill, so that standing still long enough let the cold creep back up through the soles. A wind moved along the tracks in steady intervals, not strong enough to be disruptive but persistent, slipping between bodies, catching at loose fabric,
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Taine has really sort his head, at least he got some extra material to sort thanks Pip's show. But if Pip keeps on being close to Simon, Lynix has little Chance to enjoy the new boyfriend.
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So. Some sort of happy ending/ happy farewell. Matty got his boy and Alex got his boys, so if any following season comes probably Alex adds more to his boy collection.
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I have a feeling we're dealing with Gabriel's twin brother from Homeland.
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You've done a good job. Im just wondering how Gabriel is saying goodbye to Sean without making more chaos.
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I can understand, then maybe I bother you to confess the plot for the other two books after you're done with posting this one
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Guess you gotta write an extra prologue just for Chris 😂
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Pip and Lynix? They could have sorta worked but they have different vibes. I'm glad it didn't. Lynix is a lot happier with Simon and his teacups. So Edgar is some kind of meat demon?
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Finally Charlie found something for himself and his mom is the best. I'm not sure Mr. Ellis likes her much.
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Here I go. I even found the flowers from Gareth 😎
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This is getting weirder and weirder. Matt is the best, who knew he was into a foursome,but then he was fine with Lynix. Speaking of Tofu, I have a package of bio Tofu in the fridge, which goes well with the broccoli from last week and I wonder if I still have my vegan cheese....ok I go cook.
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I like Tyler, but he's getting too good, too booooring, acting like he knows what Taine needs and always being there. I would have filed 10 times for a divorce if I had a partner like that....except they can't, they're not married yet.
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I feel im existing aggressively while lost and a baby Cecil? Oh no, there's nothing worse than a cursed diaper and sleepless night. I guess I'm too traumatized to read about baby eternal living humanoids
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You're horribly awesome, I'm not gonna look at red pens the same again.
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I thought the German Tax and bureaucracy was bad, but I'm wondering what they do in Warwick that it turned out so in your story. I'm looking forward to Charlie's and Taylor's fight over Taine or we should start a Champaign #boyfriend4charlie. But honestly I can't imagine Taine in Florida.
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What? They have their own story? Then please write them! I have more cookies and I'm behaving 🍪🍪🍪 first, before I get out and haunt/ hunt you! Hhhmmm since they are private I don't want to know you suck on what/ at what?!? But Scott is a nice side character you created and he has a high potential in helping Gabriel, besides he takes interesting photos so Sean+Gabriel might want to be photographed by him for the invitation to their wedding 😂😉
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That's a lot of action, thinking about it we haven't heard of the senator at all
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I really liked the part about Michael, you did a good job showing his inner struggle to accept himself and what he was raised with. And thanks goodness he didn't do anything stupid and was so rational. You also get an extra 🍪 for not doing anything to Scott. Gabriel needs him. BTW who's Chris? Did I miss him?😱 Or is it DJ?
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So 9 to go, but if you keep on adding more sex scenes ( or did you lie about having no time for the sex anymore?!) then it's gonna be more than 22 chapters, just saying.
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Aftermath: Rumors, Repercussions, and Really Bad Timing
Kileoli commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Aftermath: Rumors, Repercussions, and Really Bad Timing
Seriously you considered ending something with so much gossip potential? Good you didn't. 😎 It's so satisfying that Sky and Ryan talked finally, what worries me is that Sloane gets in trouble.- 28 comments
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You're right. My bad, I didn't read properly. The guy did return everything. And it's a good thing you want to post frequently, it's no fun harassing you about new chapters since it doesn't work anyway.
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It's so mean of you to get Gabriel drunk. I'm a bit worried about Scott, but worse is this mysterious guy rubbing poor Gabriel so he can't run away. The cross is definitely worth investigating though.
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The Dark Inside Your Heart
Kileoli commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Dark Inside Your Heart
To finish the foul task from his childhood, should Theodor kill Vee and Jack? And Cassandra wanted to get rid of Theo at all costs so was she trying to stop the stinky tree or are they in the same team destroying the wolves?- 17 comments
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Chapter 4: Parameter study
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 4: Parameter study
You will be officially the most unique modest glitter-resistent gay guy. Thus you are allowed to take your kink secrets to the underworld, where you receive a glitter box in exchange of your secrets. May the gods of glitter and kink like you. -
Chapter 4: Parameter study
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 4: Parameter study
How do you know that you're the most modest gay guy? Rick has a theory that such people do not exist. They just need to be introduced to the magical fountain of kinkiness. Liam used to be shy and turn 50 shades of pink thinking about stuff until Rick happened and rubbed his glitter in and on him. Now Liam writes freely about the next horrible position and puts the newest toys on his wishlist. Thanks to online shopping and the postman you can order things without anyone knowing, or do you have your in-laws who accidentally open your orders without looking carefully at the names?!😅😂
