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Poor Jesse. The question is if Hank can fix him
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Lard would have never been my choice of lube, but at least it's good to know how to get things clean.
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That was a sweet chapter, almost too much romance and sweetness 🤮 for me. I just realized how different the world was then. With 20 you were a man with everything set, with 40 you were close to death. But today is so different, with 20 you have hardly any idea what life is, with 40 you are almost deciding to decide 😁
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Chapter 6 - Building A Life
Kileoli commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Building A Life
That's so unfair to Andrew. I can understand that Marcus cannot let go of James but he has to or find a way around it. Otherwise it will get real dirty and painful for the three of them. Did I miss it or haven't Marcus's parents never met Andrew? -
Welcome Davide, It's cool that you introduced yourself here and readers are important, without them writing makes no fun. So keep on reading.
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That was the question of me. It's good to get the answer. But it's really historically interesting that Canadians were so flexible. I still remember what a load of paperwork it was to change my name. We could officially change names since 2001 with life time partnership, but the laws we're not the same as the rights for married couples. Marriage for all is not really that old, (10.2017), which makes things a lot easier regarding kids, hospitals,..... So although Germany is and was very friendly to same sex couples, from the legal point of view , we were so damn slow.
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The question is did they leave the deed or the box. And now is the full war on. They are allowed to play dirty. Give them dynamite, pretty please. @Topher Lydon
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Thanks for the short summary. You are too fast in writing and there's too many things interconnected. Id love to read but the day is too short. I just got time to read them now since I was on a business trip and a colleague is driving. Let's see if I read all the chapters or I need a vomiting break.
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No thanks..I'm fine in my Jack Wolfskins.
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That is wild how things haven't changed much when governments want something. Its a shame we can shoot them back. I like the Grady, always the practical one.
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Ok. What did I miss again?! Am I dealing with magical unicorns /horses or hot farmers turning into demons? I refuse reading the book one. Is there a summary of it?
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I didn't think the Maverickville in 1800 was so wrong. Even worse than Orel's. Im gonna get my gun to join the boys, but they have to wait till summer. The Canadian winter is too cold for me.
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Thanks. Let's hope I can move the story smoothly forward.
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Rick has already initiated but for himself.😁
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The sky over the Sea of Marmara thinned from copper into a violet haze, the light dissolving slowly, as if reluctant to leave the water. The rock beneath them held the memory of afternoon heat; it pressed upward through fabric and bone, steady and almost intimate. Salt clung to their forearms. Somewhere behind them, cutlery struck porcelain in a café, the sound traveling thinly across the promenade before being swallowed by wind. Rick lay back on his elbows, ankles crossed, narrating the wo
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The first time Rick kissed him, it felt like a joke. Salt on his cheek. Wind in his mouth. Laughter close enough to pass for safety. Later, in another country, in a kitchen with colder light and windows that didn’t open the same way, Liam would remember that night by the water and try to locate the exact second when his life tilted. He would search for a crack in the structure — a warning sound, a visible fault line, he would never find. Warning: Although the whole plot, jokes, scenes and thoughts are mine, I used a lot of help from AI. I might go through the whole story and rewrite it myself for now my apologies.
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Chapter 5: Origin of babies
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 5: Origin of babies
Rick and Liam have just two options, grant Tiffany's wish or convince her it's not possible. Or in Rick's case he has to lose weight. Otherwise she won't give up. -
Jack should start selling items on Etsy and he'll be rich in no time. A box of glitter of hope, a smelly magical sock, a condom full of alpha sperms,...
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I think I might have a problem!!! You are probably not the only one😂 Was losing his virginity not enough motivation?!😉
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There was so much sex and so much information, it was pretty difficult to concentrate 😉 but....Could Gabriel make any more mistakes, specifically now that he's the target of another of his kind? And in the end Sean left him without even a kiss! 😄 I just wonder if Lonnie could get into Gabriel's account , couldn't he see the transactions? Or Scott made random stuff up without paying attention to the sum?
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Chapter 1: The car that purrs
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 1: The car that purrs
Oh no. You really can't compare a Japanese car with a German beauty.*feels insulted*. But seriously, I get your point. It's totally a different feeling. An electric car with all of its fancy stuff is more about comfort but the real feeling of driving and the connection with the engine is not there anymore. I mean the electric cars are great from 0-60 but still I prefer a Porsche ( not the e version) on an Autobahn. That's why Liam was not happy either. ..."Liam’s hands remained on the wheel a beat longer than necessary. “It doesn’t roar,” he said quietly, as if returning to his original question. “It somehow purrs.” Rick nodded. “It’s not trying to impress you.” “That’s what bothers me,” Liam admitted, and then, because he had to puncture sincerity quickly, added, “I prefer a Porsche Cayenne on sunny days. Something that makes noise like it has opinions.”... -
The warmth rose without announcement, seeping through the thin soles of their socks and settling slowly into their knees as they sat on the floor among boxes that smelled faintly of cotton and cardboard and something older — milk, perhaps, or talcum powder worked so deeply into fabric it had become part of it. The air carried that quiet residue of small bodies once lifted and changed and carried, and the storage room held its symmetry with the stubborn order of a space that had already been orga
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CHAPTER 13: DAY 9 - THE PIRATE SHIP
Kileoli commented on LJCC's story chapter in CHAPTER 13: DAY 9 - THE PIRATE SHIP
Wow, I hope for Klebber and Dennis does not take that long? And I thought me and my husband are the dramatic unromantic couple. BTW, don't you want to write your story? It sounds irritatingly interesting to read😄 -
CHAPTER 13: DAY 9 - THE PIRATE SHIP
Kileoli commented on LJCC's story chapter in CHAPTER 13: DAY 9 - THE PIRATE SHIP
Exactly my point, Dennis and Klebber are so cutely disturbingly scarred and imperfect, that I don't think being one of them or having them as a lover is a real winning. Even their love is nothing to envy. That's why I wonder what @LJCCwant to have? -
CHAPTER 13: DAY 9 - THE PIRATE SHIP
Kileoli commented on LJCC's story chapter in CHAPTER 13: DAY 9 - THE PIRATE SHIP
I have a ton of friends who got divorced in the pandemic, so, er, I didn't want to say anything if that happened to you. 🤣 But yeah, I'm also bitter about this story, but the Klebber and Dennis have lived in my head for two years, and all I can say is their love story is pretty annoying, and all I've been saying is, "Why can't it happen to me?" I really have no idea what I said that indicated extra portion of negativity during COVID. I mean it was a nightmare came true all over the world and depending on which country people they were, lives were changed more or less. But that was me probably making a common statement. Looking back, I really didn't have it bad, mainly pissed because of the useless limitations, and strange rules turning running to my only possible addiction. Now that I'm fully back to my weekly climbing- dosage ,im totally fine. To be honest I had tons of home Office hours which I professionally spent on gaming and procrastinating. so no divorce, it's not even worth bothering about it since it's gonna be too expensive 😂 But from your annoying characters that the reader wants to strangle from time to time, which one do you want to be? Or which one can't happen to you? The cute sexy traumatized Klebber or the rich Dennis with his issues worth years of therapy? 😂
