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Kileoli

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  1. Kileoli

    Intervention

    I guess it's too late. Your reputation is ruined. @Jason Rimbaudwhen do publish according to different time zones, then we get more chapters, right? I guess it's worth discussing it with the admins or...you publish 2 in 1.
  2. I'm glad you liked it. I spent way too much time playing so it might be there's too much blah blah. Honestly in the first book is way too blah, im gonna edit it probably sometime. I suggest when it gets too boring just do skim and go to the next chapter.
  3. Kileoli

    Intervention

    If i do the math right, there should be like5-6 more chapters? This is so annoying to wait. I'm gonna book my ticket to Hawaii to meet Gabriel there, and also till this story is complete.
  4. Kileoli

    Realization

    Another theory is...that's you with all your power 😂 I somehow managed to miss this chapter yesterday but I'm glad I did. Now I don't have to wait
  5. I can send you the recipe if you have time or wait till @drsawzall makes it and ask him nicely to send you a piece 😂
  6. Exactly thats the case. And he's not alone or Liam is naive and even after so many years fall in the traps 😁
  7. It's a matter of measuring method and correct conversion. Maybe it was in cm 😂
  8. Kileoli

    Prologue

    This one is so different and promising.
  9. The apartment held the quiet density of evening, the kind that settled into corners as the light outside thinned but didn’t fully disappear. A single lamp near the couch cast a warm, uneven circle across the room, leaving the kitchen half in shadow, the edges of the counter catching just enough light to outline the objects Liam had arranged earlier—knife aligned with the cutting board, a glass placed precisely at the edge, a folded dish towel squared. Rick lay stretched across the couch, one s
  10. Kileoli

    Chapter 2

    I'm not sure if I asked the right thing anymore! *Runs away and hide*
  11. Kileoli

    Chapter 2

    So are we dealing with rats or warriors waiting to kill? I wonder what happens if I nicely ask @Topher Lydonfor a dinosaur story?!
  12. Kileoli

    Chapter 9

    It's always good to have a demon/demons on your side. Edgar is definitely not done considering we're still on ch9 unless someone makes Kebab out of that not Vegan plant.
  13. Wait, did I accidentally send you my notes to part 2 or why are suggesting Liam to drink? He tried Absinthe 80%, one of his worse decisions ever, that thing was horrible to drink and causes hours of headache. I think everyone has a collection of things they can't let go, it's part of us and defines us. I have a box full of baby stuff attached to crazy memories, we gave away almost all baby stuff but not those in my treasure box, it's stupid but I like to have something to show the kids when they are older. There is actually a part 2 and 3 since the Aussie (ex-boy) friend was here for four days, I have the notes and plots but it probably gets boring. Although it never gets boring for Rick and his other allies to annoy Liam, I guess he's just so naive and easy to piss off. On your way, ( I gotta find something in English or translate one). It's not really complicated, it just takes soooo much time.
  14. Kileoli

    Illusive

    You might write a story with/for @chris191070
  15. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    I like them and Val. I want a sword too, you know the light expensive one... Or any other sword will do.
  16. Medovik, my nightmare cake. All in all, it was a nice visit from my Aussie guy and now my English is promoted from German-English to Australian-German-English. Zat ist very good, oder?
  17. The platform held a mild, uneven warmth, the kind that gathered in patches where the sun broke through moving clouds and then disappeared again when the light shifted. The concrete was dry but not yet fully heated, still carrying a faint memory of the morning chill, so that standing still long enough let the cold creep back up through the soles. A wind moved along the tracks in steady intervals, not strong enough to be disruptive but persistent, slipping between bodies, catching at loose fabric,
  18. Kileoli

    Chapter 8

    Taine has really sort his head, at least he got some extra material to sort thanks Pip's show. But if Pip keeps on being close to Simon, Lynix has little Chance to enjoy the new boyfriend.
  19. So. Some sort of happy ending/ happy farewell. Matty got his boy and Alex got his boys, so if any following season comes probably Alex adds more to his boy collection.
  20. Kileoli

    Illusive

    I have a feeling we're dealing with Gabriel's twin brother from Homeland.
  21. Kileoli

    Illusive

    You've done a good job. Im just wondering how Gabriel is saying goodbye to Sean without making more chaos.
  22. Kileoli

    Congress

    I can understand, then maybe I bother you to confess the plot for the other two books after you're done with posting this one
  23. Kileoli

    Congress

    Guess you gotta write an extra prologue just for Chris 😂
  24. Kileoli

    Chapter 7

    Pip and Lynix? They could have sorta worked but they have different vibes. I'm glad it didn't. Lynix is a lot happier with Simon and his teacups. So Edgar is some kind of meat demon?
  25. Kileoli

    Chapter 6

    Finally Charlie found something for himself and his mom is the best. I'm not sure Mr. Ellis likes her much.
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