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That's one thing with reality shows based on humiliation and suffering, and those watching them being really psychos, but the other thing is the cruelty of kids at school. There are enough cases of mobbing and bullying without being part of a game, that is scary. They start as early as kindergarten with cornering the kids who do not fit in their books. I didn't think six year old kids could be so cruel until they started bullying my daughter and nope, no adult interferes in such topics, the kids have to figure it out themselves. They preach about equality for everyone but when a kid is teased for having two dads, it's our problem to deal with the crying kid who refuses to go to kindergarten and cannot sleep alone anymore. Funny is when two years later a teacher accidentally locked up the mean kid for a short time in the classroom to think about his actions, the teacher was kicked out of the blue without saying bye to the class and someone needed hours of therapy and the support and understanding of his classmates. I'm not saying what the teacher did was right but sometimes I feel the same way. It's like the society has a way of protecting bullies or those who have fun hurting others. You did a great job showing how the teachers closed their eyes on Sam and kids like him.
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Thanks for the warning at the beginning. Too slow to help, to blind to see and too indifferent to care. For some people humans lives are nothing, just a piece on their chess game.
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Chapter 9 - The Mask Falls
Kileoli commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 9 - The Mask Falls
Marcus should be very proud of himself for taking control and not giving Hunter the chance to manipulate him. That takes a lot of guts. In reality many victims walk back to their tormenters or never get away from them. Letting the abuser keep on abusing them. -
Chapter 8 - The Truth
Kileoli commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 8 - The Truth
That was a great sad chapter and one hell of a twist. As I started reading the story I was like what could really happen but this I didn't see. The emotions were so raw, it hurt. I hope life got better for you too. -
It was different from the other two. Sadder and stronger still a happy ending. Eryk should help Mikey or he wouldn't have a chance to survive. I wonder if we get to see the boys again.
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This was pretty interesting to have Mikey's view and the incident with Timmy. Aunt Sally was cool too. And everything worked perfect like a fairytale. What was confusing was the sudden you approach in the middle. But nice sweet story
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How many more chapters do you have waiting? Is there a book 2?
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It's on Netflix, juhu! I need chips, spicy sauce and where's my popcorn?! Wait. But Netflix is banned for me until I deliver the victory of a finished draft. Life is so unfair. * Creates more water stains on ceilings*
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Where should they find their demon hunting thing? Are there online courses or should they follow Charlie's lead and read books? Chloe is my favorite character right now. Do you have a bitch fight between Chloe and the magical three coming into garden?
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Chapter 10: Operation Oven
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 10: Operation Oven
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The way Zippy duct-taped his car so he could just get to Mikey was the best thing ever. I could imagine every single move. And Mikey rewarded him with his wonderful mouth and somemore. Do they get home at all?
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You'll receive your own pendant equivalent. Tomorrow you will be given one of these when you get up. They are soooo good.
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This is so evilishly good. I bet you had a lot of fun writing them and it was an awesome solution to save Charlie's sorry ass. Are the three girls still camping in Hartley's garden? Will Ellis make deals with them so they get extra power?
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Thanks. I was waiting for this, now they can play dirty like the archivist. Yeah Tim's life has changed a lot but Justin's not better since hockey was his life and family. Do we have a love triangle (or arrow) now? Miller grain silo....sounds like a shady place to meet. I keep on thinking of Müller and your placeholder name. Unfortunately I couldn't find a proper pronunciation of Herr Müller but this should do. https://share.google/yKL234smqfDfSuUpU
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Chapter 10: Operation Oven
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 10: Operation Oven
Oh no, my bad. They taste so good, they are added to the shopping list and ... to Liam's code.... B1": "Frottage", # Carrot parsnip category – reserved for future classification "B2": "Satisfyer" # Butternut squash -for single actions, needs preparation and cutting } I totally ruined all the vegetables so I can't eat them anymore, should I stop being a vegetarian.. then come all sausages in question... -
Chapter 10: Operation Oven
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 10: Operation Oven
Parsnips are not on my active vocabulary list, they terrorized me as a kid in my grandma's soups. As an adult we never made peace except they turned to baby food ( some might think it was my attempt to traumatize the kids too, but strangely they loved it) I replace one carrot in the story with a parsnip. That should do, right? And the boys have something to discuss.( A new study on carrots and parsnips from the form point of view. The suggestion of the story was from you, it took me a train trip to write it. So if you have more ideas, I'm open 😂 -
On the second try I managed to finish the story without falling sleep. It was just back to the time of watching Star Trek and Star wars with dead civilizations, stealth mode for the ships and sad holograms. Still you did a great time walking Lando and Frocken to their goal. Thanks for the cool story Im gonna catch some sleep
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Chapter 10: Operation Oven
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 10: Operation Oven
And this is the countertop. -
Rick noticed the smell before anything else registered. It drifted slowly through the apartment in warm, familiar waves—melted cheese, tomato sauce deepening in the heat, the faint toasted edge of dough somewhere beneath it all. Under ordinary circumstances it would have been reassuring—the quiet signal that dinner was progressing exactly as intended. Yet as he stood in the hallway breathing it in, the stillness of the apartment pressed gently against his awareness, along with the familiar suspi
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With the three witches and the orgie?! There are enough boys for the creepy witches with love potions. Tyler, Matt, Simon and the Prof. So if Chloe was not so young.... It's gonna be more distracting. I was hoping Tyler could give Taine some private wrestling lessons....
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Just two? Wow I forgot that information. Nice date to be ruined by a dying body. Btw what happened to the boy Taine was supposed to save from before the train incident. * Why is it always trains?*
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How can they be soooo f*** stupid?! Seriously just walking to Sam and Leo? And why were they together anyway after breaking up?! Justin commited the social suicide anyway, he might as well stop going to school. On the side note: I was too busy reading your story I got out of the train one station too early. The damned ICE left without me and now I'm sitting in the train station watching a couple making dog sounds, probably too high and figuring out how I get away from here. Im so gonna be late for my meeting. * Serves me right for reading stories during the working hours.*
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So if Vee is the bridge. is Jack the tree Theo must climb?
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The extra—call it interest. On a debt you didn't have to pay." Taine blinked. "What?" Ok I don't get it. Didn't Taine have to pay Charlie's debt? Or the interest? I like Charlie's family, showing there's hope even among politicians.
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It's good to not fight alone and they are waiting 😗
